To Live In Harmony

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I was looking around my desktop for a storybook muse and the only thing that looked promising was Virtual Villagers 4 (which, for you fellow players, is way too easy but has a nice new features). So out sprung this.



To Live In Harmony
A Virtual Villagers Story




You Can Join Even If You Have Played None Of The “Virtual Villagers” Games


Also, if you are uncomfortable writing about deities, then I’m warning you. This could have a good deal of reference to the “Great Guiding Hand” (Remember that from V.V. 3? The festival?), even prayer. If this makes you uncomfortable or if your faith doesn’t allow you to partake in things like this, for your own good, I would suggest you not join. I have no idea how this will turn out, and there is a good chance it could include what I stated before.






Basic Idea – This is Virtual Villagers from the villagers’ perspective. It’s not going to be like a video game; I want it to be realistic. So you have emotions and thoughts and personalities, you get married instead of being able to reach a population of 90 with only one guy, you don’t go to work mindlessly, there’s both day and night, etc., etc. Make sense? If Virtual Villagers was real, then this would be from the views of those real villagers.



Prologue:

“Listen! Oki, make them listen!”

A well-built man raised his staff above his head. In seconds the crowd’s chattering died down to the point where you could hear the waves beating against the beach. A little girl in a cheerful red and yellow gown stood above them all on a platform. The eyes of the fifty-plus crowd turned to her instantly and she gave a tiny squeal. If Grandfather hadn’t died she could have waited a few years to take his place. If only. Clearing her throat she continued, trying to sound as chiefly as she could.

“Brothers and sisters,” she began, “almost a century ago our ancestors came to this corner of Isola, and directed by the Guiding Hand, we have thrived and prospered. But just last night, as she slept, the Oracle was visited in a vision. She was told of a new corner filled with discord. There, the balances of nature have been disrupted, with the flora and fauna nearly destroying each other. The Oracle believes it is a sign from the Guiding Hand that we must go there to bring healing and harmony.

“I believe her, and after careful consideration with my advisors, I have decided that it is the will of the Guiding Hand that we send out a party to this new corner. With them we will send the knowledge of our histories and the hopes of our future. We will let the Guiding Hand choose who will go. If you are chosen, you have until tomorrow morning to wish your families goodbye. Know that you may never return.”

After that was silence from everyone. The sick didn’t cough, the babies didn’t cry. There was only an anxious silence. But slowly, circles of white light began to grow around the feet of seven people. As the circles grew thicker and brighter, thick clouds started to form in the once clear night sky, making the only lights the seven rings and the village fire.

A strong wind picked up. The fire blew out, and the rings became even brighter, as they always did in the presence of the Guiding Hand. The wind blew logs from the woodpile down to the beach, but felt like only a gentle breeze to the villagers. It tore a mast off one of the fishing boats and laid it among the wood.

Soon the gale had gathered all the materials necessary for their departure boat. Everyone knew that they had made the right choice.



To Start Off:

We start off on the morning of out departure. We know from the stories of the elders that the Guiding Hand always uses a violent storm to take us to our new home, so we are told to bunker down and hang on tight.

After that, we can skim the storm and get to the shipwreck, then start to live. I’m thinking that there should be three NPCs at the new corner, and we need to think of a name for the corner.



Puzzles:

You didn’t think I would start this without puzzles, did you? :) Puzzles could be a great way to keep the story moving if we ever get stuck. If we ever finish all the puzzles, we finish the SB.

If we get seriously going with these, only complete one per story day maximum. They aren’t the only source of drama.

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1.) The Fire
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Start a fire and assign someone to maintain it.

Allows the villagers to keep warm on those cold nights and acts as a hospital.

2.) The Well
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Discover the spring and build a well around it.

The first night someone needs to have a vision.

Gives the village fresh water.(Requires guidance)

3.) The Cub
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After discovering the injured bear cub (a week or so into the story), create an herbal poultice and splint, then use both to heal its broken leg. (Requires someone(s) with Adept Scientist and Trainee Healer skills)

4.) Insecticide
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Discover an insecticide that scares the aphids away from the rose without killing them.

5.) The Kiln
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A Master Builder must be led to the fire. That night he will receive a vision that shows him the plans for a kiln, and tell him that objects will heat up faster and more thoroughly with it. He will proceed to start the project. Finishing the kiln takes five days with one builder. (Requires a Master Builder and Guidance)

The villagers can now make pottery and cook their food.

6.) [Gimme a minute.]
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Check back later.

7.) The Garden
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A farmer must find seeds somewhere (I haven’t put anything on the map yet, so use your imagination). Then he has to plant them and tend the shoots.

Let’s say that these special Isolan seeds grow really fast so we can have our veggies sooner than by summer.

Gives the villagers a steady food supply.

8.) Iron
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Someone has to be given a vision of sparkles in the sand of the beach. They will go to look and find iron ore just under the sand. A builder can next have a vision to melt it down in a ceramic mold. (Requires the kiln and Guidance)

This allows the villagers to make stronger tools and structures.

9.) [I’m thinking.]
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Check back later.

10.) Voices
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Discover the potion that allows the Oracle to speak to animals.

11.) Glass
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A Builder must be shown the pure sand pit. That night, he will have a vision telling him to heat the sand in a mold. The next morning he does so and creates glass. (Requires the kiln and Guidance.)

The villagers can now make glass, which can become cups, vials, and windows. With research, the villagers could also make eye glasses and magnifying glasses.

12.) The Farm
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Check back later.

13.) The Temple
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The ruins must be discovered and shown to a Master Builder. The ruins cannot be discovered without guidance. (Requires a Master Builder, glass and Guidance)

Allows villagers

14.) [I’m working on it.]
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Check back later.

15.) [Working on this one, too.]
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Check back later.

16.) [We can’t finish the game too quickly, can we?]
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Check back later.


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The Guiding Hand – The deity of the village, the Guiding Hand leads us to new parts of our island, new food sources, new resources, and leads our children to valuable relics or mushrooms. It guides us as to what step to take in our lives and what skills to teach our children when we ask. We thank it with festivals and prayer.

I think a good way to be led rather than being picked up by a giant hand would be to lose control of your body and walk/jog/run somewhere.

Ever play favorites with your villagers? I do. If you want, we can have one character who is ‘teacher’s pet’, a favorite of the Guiding Hand who gets led more often in exchange for new clothes and maybe a new name. (S)he could be an oracle as well, being visited by visions or something.




Rules (You must read and follow!):


-All YWS rules (good grammar, punctuation, etc.)
-Use spellcheck and proofread your posts.
-Please first write out your posts on MS Word or some other program to ensure correct spelling and readable paragraphs.
-Take your time on posts. Really. Take an hour if you have it. I reserve the right to void poor posts. Don’t post just for the sake of posting, move the story along with each post.
-Post! Regularly!

-Romance is fine and could be really fun, but nothing mature or graphic. I don’t consider a kiss graphic, but much further is too much.
-Please keep cursing mild and minimal. If you cuss too often I reserve to right to kick you out.
-Keep the horror and gore PG-13. I respect that things could get creepy as they could in any story, but if the need arises, be gentle so I can keep the PG-13 rating.
-No drugs.



Profile Template:

Because this is going slowly, up to three characters per person. Seven characters. I’m going to be picky, so if there is something seriously wrong with your profile or you left something out, I’m going to call you on it. If you don’t fix it, I will officially as my official officer self void your profile.

And I have to say, to complete the puzzles, we need someone who is a Master/Late Adept Builder, someone who is a Trainee Healer, and someone who at least Adept in Farming. In successful tribes like the one we leave, someone can reach Master by age 25 if they stick to it.

Please, take the time to be thorough/detailed/realistic.

List of Names



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[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Child of:[/b]

[b]Gender:[/b]

[b]Age:[/b]

[b]Personality:[/b]

[b]Appearance:[/b]

[b]Clothes:[/b]

[b]*Photos (Please spoiler. If from Photobucket, only provide a link, do not [ img ] )[/b]


[b]Job and Level:[/b]

[b]Relations/Friends:[/b]

[b]Past:[/b]

[b]Up for love?:[/b] You can’t get married until you are eighteen, but you can fall in love before.

[b]Likes:[/b]

[b]Dislikes/Fears:[/b]

[b]Skills:[/b] (Give as percentages. Do not go overboard, as in; don’t make you eighteen-year-old a master scientist, builder and farmer. Keep it reasonable.)
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0%-10% Nothing
11%-35% Trainee
36%-70% Adept
71%-100% Master
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[i]Farming:[/i] []
[i]Building:[/i] []
[i]Research:[/i] []
[i]Healing:[/i] []
[i]Parenting:[/i] []


[b]Other:[/b]




Discussion Thread.


Have fun!
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Name: Nyota
Child of: Hula and Bobo

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Personality: Very formal and serious, isn’t really one to kid around. When she’s researching, you cannot drag her away from her work. It simply isn’t possible. Always lives in the present because the last time she thought of the future her hair turned white. When she’s relaxing she acts like she’s daydreaming, staring off into the distance or watching someone work. Anti-social, introverted and stutters unless she’s talking about chemistry. Tries to have nice conversations but they just don’t work out.

Appearance: Her most noticeable feature is that her hair is snow white (see past). Her hair is white and boy cut for convenience when doing alchemy. Nyota has an oval face shape with rosy cheeks and like-colored lips. Cream colored skin and deep blue eyes, with a ring of darker blue around her iris’. Five-feet, six inches tall, thin build and not very muscular.

Clothes: A black/dark navy, ankle-length dress with a large diamond print in yellow-gold thread. Sleeveless. Goes barefoot. Wears an anklet of wooden beads given her by her grandmother and a snowflake obsidian pendant around her neck, which she rubs when she’s nervous and holds when she’s praying.


*Photos

Nyota.
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Just imagine that her eyebrows are white.

Her dress.
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Her pendant.
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Job and Level: Adept Scientist

Relations/Friends:
Hula – Her mother, an Adept Scientist.
Bobo – Her father, a Master Healer. Was the village doctor in the old village.
Mazi – Old village sweetheart.


Past: All through her childhood she attended the school while the most of the other children looked for collectibles and played tag. At first she wanted to join them, but her parents kicked that out of her and she ended with her scholarly life becoming her entire life.

At fourteen she had studied enough to quickly become a trainee, which grabbed the attention of the old chief, who introduced his grandson, Mazi, to her. The two quickly became known as sweethearts, and rumors spread that they had promised each other marriage, though that was a lie.

The only major event that occurred up until the night she was chosen was the first time she made a potion. She tested it on herself not a child like others had suggested and it turned her hair pure white, permanently.


Up for love?: Yes

Likes: Night, stars, water, alchemy

Dislikes/Fears: Heat, bright light, papaya

Skills:
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0%-10% Nothing
11%-35% Trainee
36%-70% Adept
71%-100% Master
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Farming: [0%]
Building: [0%]
Science: [46%]
Healing: [3%] (genetic)
Parenting: [0%]


Other: Is horribly nearsighted.
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.

Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe.

Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything he learned in school.

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I love VV!!! Didn't know there was a new game out :shock:

I will DEFINATELY join :smt050
Elizabeth: "There will come a moment when you will have a chance to show it. To do the right thing."
Jack: "I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by."




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Name: Mazi
Child of: Noriko and Nasinu

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Personality: Generally appears optimistic no matter the situation. He is fairly confident with those he knows well, but it can take him a while to trust newcomers. Once his trust is won, he is fiercely loyal.

Appearance:
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Clothes:
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Job and Level: Adept Builder
Farming: [12%]
Building: [48%]
Science: [0%]
Healing: [2%]
Parenting: [0%]

Relations/Friends:
Rika: Older sister.
Nyota: Childhood sweetheart.

Past:

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Name: Lola
Child of: Aloha and Raku

Gender: Female

Age: 22

Personality: Fairly quiet, she mostly keeps to herself. Doesn't like to see people hurt or ill and will often ask people if they are feeling alright.

Appearance:
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Clothes:
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Job and Level: Adept Doctor
Farming: [10%]
Building: [0%]
Science: [15%]
Healing: [45%]
Parenting: [0%]

Relations/Friends:
Nyota: They were Trainee Scientists together until Lola decided to turn to medicine. Have remained close friends.

Past:

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Name: Rika
Child of: Noriko and Nasinu

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Personality: Friendly and eneregtic, she is a good companion. She is very optimistic, but can be annoying at times due to her sensitivity and occasionally attention-seeking personality.

Appearance:
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Clothes: (Ignore girl please)
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Job and Level: Trainee Farmer

Farming: [30%]
Building: [15%]
Science: [10%]
Healing: [5%]
Parenting: [0%]

Relations/Friends:
Mazi: Her older brother

Past:

All are up for love :smt003
Last edited by kidashka on Wed May 19, 2010 12:20 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Jack: "I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by."




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So far, those are awesome, kidashka. The girls actually look like villagers. And you made Mazi? :P We'll start once they're finished.


Name: Kanji
Child of: Azizi and Hope

Gender: Male

Age: 26

Personality: Down-to-earth, honest, a workaholic and very blunt. If you said, “How’s the weather?” he’d say, “Horrible. Perfect for beans, but I’m growing corn.” Loves company and socializing.

Appearance: Shaggy brown hair that goes down to his shoulders and stubble around his pink lips. A straight nose and gray-blue eyes. Strong, six-foot-one.

Clothes: An orange and yellow, floral/diamond print sarong.

*Photos

Kanji
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His clothes.
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Job and Level: Adept Farmer

Relations/Friends:
Bass – Father
Hope - Mother

Past: Spent his entire childhood watching his parents work, his entire teens working with them, and his adulthood so far working with them and looking for a wife.

Up for love?: Well, yes, but he’s twenty-six…

Likes: Running, working

Dislikes/Fears: Spiders

Skills:
Farming: [49%]
Building: [0%]
Research: [0%]
Healing: [0%]
Parenting: [0%]


Other: None.
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.

Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe.

Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything he learned in school.

-Albert Einstein




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I was too lazy to do the history section... other than that, they're finished now. Can we start anyway?
Elizabeth: "There will come a moment when you will have a chance to show it. To do the right thing."
Jack: "I love those moments. I like to wave at them as they pass by."



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— The Bee Movie