Broken

This drawing took some time but finally done. I know the hand looks funky but how does it look...

Hey! I'm Apple and I'll be your reviewer for today.

I just want to state; it is obvious that you took a lot of time with the person in the broke mirror. That I must say was the highlight of the image for me. The eyes are so artistically done, and the shards- I just have to say I really love it!

The hand-well done but can use some work. The thunb is a 'lil awkward and the other fingers just aren't what actual fingers appear to look at. Look at your own hand and you'll see the difference.

The fire, or what I think is the fire, just some how looks to rushed for this image. It doesn't look like 'good' fire. If you got an image of fire you'll see it is spidery sort of, not awkward looking blades.

The chains and the other effects really do well for this, and I like they were placed within the image.

On an overall scale, I really like this picture. There are a few things you can do to fix it, but those are some what minor. Great job.

The only thing that I really want to comment on is the hands. I think they would be easily fixed. It needs some sign that it has knuckles. If you give it some them it will look more real. The eyes are amazing, the funny thing is I took a picture on a friends phone the other day, and it was of just my eyes and it looked sorta like this. Anywho I really like this.

-Flower-

I can tell you spent alot of time on the eyes and broken mirror and it looks great. Very artistic and lifelike. However, theres so much going on on the page. The fire, the hand, and all the other little details, it takes away from the broken mirror, your main intreset. Maybe next time, just try and do the broken mirror and maybe make the mirror a full one. Other then that, great job and I would love to see more work from you!

Ciao!

Lol, why does everyone think its fire? Its grass... ha ha, guess its not really good.
Yeah! The broken shards with the girl was the big deal for me and the eyes is what started the whole image, Apple. And I know I feel really foolish of how I drew the hand Ill readjust it soon. And yes the grass was rushed a bit, I got to be honest. Thanks for the review Apple!
I'll be sure to add knuckles, Flower. Lol, the eyes are really confusing to do, I dont really know how mine come out like that. Ha ha, I'm glad this reminded you of that. Thank you, Flower.
Thanks, NepoGirl, yeah forever on it! (Well thats what it seemed like.). Ill think about that, next time. Well if I make it a full mirror it defeats the whole meaning of why its broken, lol (if that makes any sense). Enjoy! I have others on here. Thanks girl!
-fRiEs