Gandalf and The Balrog

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Ah, thanks Sohini. :) As for clomb, yes, it is a word. It's an archaic past-tense form of climb. And as for a capital 'e' after "And lo!", I've seen it done the way I've done it. *shrug*
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I believe that, in terms of the capitalization of 'ensuing,' you've got the right of it, Bjorn--especially since this is written in a very archaic style. And... I kind of want to hate you for succeeding at writing a Petrarchan sonnet, which kick my butt every time. :D ;)
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Oh please don't! (Hate me). I don't try to succeed at what I attempt - I merely attempt it for my own amusement. However, this poem was part of an English assignment...
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“All stories are true," Skarpi said. "But this one really happened, if that's what you mean.”
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind