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Winter Raven Song

Fireweed · 2005-12-07T01:30:03Z

Glossy black on blinding white, Feathers gleam in moon-pale light, They shake white showers from the trees, Ravens ride the icy breeze. Blots of ink on a paper sheet, Purity and darkness meet, North wind carries raucous cries, Winter glints from coal-black eyes. i just scribbled this down in school today, staring out the window... the contrast of the jet black ravens on the immaculately white snow was really striking. its completely meaningless, no depth whatsoever, but i kind of like it. feed back please!

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Wed Feb 08, 2006 2:50 am

Fireweed says... · Wed Feb 08, 2006 2:50 am

merci.l

"I myself am composed entirely of flaws, stitched together with good intentions."- Augusten Burroughs

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Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:33 am

DarkerSarah says... · Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:33 am

I'm not a poet critic, but beautiful imagery!

"And I am a writer
writer of fiction
I am the heart that you call home
And I've written pages upon pages
Trying to rid you from my bones...
Let me go if you don't love me" ~The Decembrists "Engine Driver"

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Half the work that is done in this world is to make things appear what they are not.
— Elias Root Beadle

Winter Raven Song

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