Take Me. (Anime)

A/N: Wow, front page, thanks guys! :3 I'll be posting more soon! :]
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Drawing on a really lazy day... meh. I hope you like it anyways. I have more, but they're mostly... ecchi. Ololol.

...I do not know what general message I was trying to portray with this. Please don't mind the craptastic stuff too much, if you can. And sorry for the bad resolution; I don't have a scanner. But I do have a shitty camera. XD

Characters look familiar? That's Shiraiyuki Mizore (left) from Rosario+Vampire [I do love her better with her hair long... :3] and Aleksander Nikolaevich Herr (right) from The Qwaser of the Stigmata [AKA Sasha; little, cheeky, borscht-loving Russian bastard who has a tendency to grope when provoked, nicknamed the tundra boss by Oribe].

So basically, it's fan art.

Likes are appreciated!

Hi Winterblossom.

Let me just start of by saying that this is a very good drawing. I mean really good. Though there are some thing I think you could fix up. The girls eyes look soul less (unless you were intending this) you should add a little life to them to make her really shine.

Her arm also. I know drawings arms and fingers is practically impossible (to me anyway) I think that it looks stiff and out of place. You could redo it, and some how make it seem that it is actually attatched to her and not just placed into their for fun.

I think the clothes look different, and I wouldn't mind getting my hands on a skirt like hers. And the guy behind her face looks as if it were done by a proffessional anime drawer!

Hi Brea. You can call me Winter. :]

Wow, thank you, but if I redo the arm, the drawing will get dirty. Also, Mizore's eyes are really just like that, here:



...some shots of her in different angles. :]

Here's Sasha:


...I couldn't find a smaller picture. :'3

Does it look professional? XD Don't be fooled. There are a lot out there so much better than me. ;] I'm actually having a hard time with shading and stuff, and another problem is, I can get lazy. I'm only enthusiastic at the start, but as I go on, meh. Just for the sake of finishing up I finish up. I would like to get rid of the habit, though. Thanks again.

PS: I wouldn't mind having a skirt like that, either.

When I saw anime in the title I was like, that is where I am freakin going haha! I really like their faces. Like whoever above said the eyes are lifeless. Even in the pictures they have some life, maybe because they are purple. Anyway at the bottom half I got really confused. Her leg is really far out on the left side, and it really messed me up for a second. Her arms are messed up, and her neck looks like it was put on to the right of her shoulder. This may be because her left arm is out to far. It looks like you drew her body and put her head on wrong. Other than that it is good, and it's called an eraser, if you don't use it then are you truely an artist? We all make mistakes and have to fix them, I don't think anyone cares if your picture is "dirty" per say.

Keep Drawing

-Flower-

But I do like neatness, and I would like to keep this at that. XD Of course I use erasers. But I shaded in too hard, so it will smudge and it would not look good. The eyes, however, I can do something about, and the leg and left shoulder I'll try to adjust, if such things bother you so.

So there. XD

coolio, this is really good I love anime I draw allot myself but I don't have a scanner and I draw for me to see and not for anybody else, because I'm not very good I think the one on the left 'forgotten her name,' 's eyes really seem to show who she is, if you get my meaning. Hope to see some more

Hi there, Shade! Thanks! That's good, drawing for yourself only. That's what every artist should be doing, drawing for themselves and not for other people, so that their work would feel more rewarding afterwards. But I think it's okay to show others your work from time to time so that you can evaluate what else you can improve, and later become better than you are now... so I suggest you post and let me see. >w< I'll do my best to help you in any way I can. :3

I don't quite get what you mean by 'forgetting her own name' up there. :] Mind to clarify, so that I can change it? You'll see more of me soon, I guarantee. XD

Thanks for the reviews, everyone!

KD here to review!

Pros-

-Hair. Is. Awesome.
-Great job on eyes. You gave them great expression. Overall the faces are well done too.
-I like the shading you did on the guy. I think overall you did a much better job with him.

Cons-
(Look at picture attachment for corrections.)
-In Orange: The pillow pattern is distracting me.
-In Red: Her legs are too thin. Her position is also a bit strange.
-In Green: The shape of her arms are very odd. Proportions.
-In Blue: This whole area confuses me. I don't exactly know what is going on there.

Keep up the good work! Hope I helped, leave a note in my guestbook if you need anything-

KD

OK, my first thought was amazing! but when i looked at the detail i noticed how her right arm is bending in two places, and how her legs awkwardly stick out... there aren't any flaws on the man, but i suggest you edit the lower half of the girls body, her arm is just... really odd ok? it looks broken!
anyway, i still love it!

~Mystic