Roberto Who Was Greedy

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I seriously can't get enough of your poems. They are funny and have great morals. And, like I said last time, the rhyming and the wording are the best parts. i really like it, keep writing more. i am going to go review some more of them. They are so good.




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Thank you very much, Lele. :) I'm working on some more so I'll put them on here as soon as possible!
We'd rather die with our bones of youth.




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Hey Sopster,
I really liked the clevernesss of your voice in this poem, and the altogether lightheartedness in the way that you presented the death of a boy. It was very funny, as intended, and the rhythm seems a bit awkward in some spots in teh beginning, but it's nothing I would worry about. I think I've reviewed other work by you but I forgot, is a lot of the poetry you write like this? You're very talented.
-Alex
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Sometimes I'm terrified of my heart; of its constant hunger for whatever it is it wants. The way it stops and starts.
— Poe