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irishfire wrote:Timmeh:

Really?! Thats creepy O_o... Do you by any chance have a twin sister?


No, but my sister and I are only a year apart. And we suspect that I was born first, and she was too afraid to...leave? And we have all kinds of twin moments. One time, we both just randomly quoted Spongebob out of nowhere, saying, "Die zombie!" It happens all the time. :P
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Well, I must salute you, that was perhaps the funniest thing I have ever had the pleasure of reading. But here are a few things that I must bite you with,

irish beamed. “Aqua!” She snuggleglomped her. “Its me Irish!”


It is supposed to be "it's" a contraction of it is, not "its".
Irish screamed and hid behind Gsp at the sight of Ripples. Skye ran through the restaurant screaming and shooting the ceiling. No one really seem phased accept for the staff.


The word you intended to use was, "except". You made that same mistake at least one other time in your story. I'm guessing it happened when you were using the spell check on your writing program.
Irish nodded. She was glad Gabe was able to get away from the town he so obviously hated with every fiber of his being.


Believe me, I hate it a lot more than that. About my pen name being used here. I don't quite like it that much for some reason. But that's alright, I'm just so used to my real name that I just glance at that and think, Hm, who is that guy?

Also, I'm wondering what the heck I was doing with a blue machine gun. Blue is epic though, so I liked that.

I could pick at your piece for many mechanical errors but don't worry, I won't. I'm simply looking at it for the light-hearted fun that it is. That's something that is very rare in the age that we live in. It's even something that I often neglect to write about too. There's just so much sorrow in the world that it seems to be the only thing translated into every type of Media. Either that or violence, drugs, sex, and everything else imaginable.
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Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god... xDDD AWESOME!
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Yay, I'm mentioned!!!!
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YAY I WAS LEFT OUT. :)

Now i shall leave you with the most disturbing thing ever. The dancing. Pink. Elephant! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

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I'm offended I wasn't mentioned.

Haha just kiddin'! This was adorable. Now I feel like writing my own. But of course I won't! Classy people don't copy.

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omg! I so want to meet you guys in real life, awh! <3 Let me know when more is up, irish! Well done!
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“Oh. My. God. BEN!”


Haha, if you actually said that then tackled me I'd be sooo scared:) but in a funny way lol.




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lol! i loved it! I want in! kammy and aqua and silented, lol! EVERYONE was in it!!!.....everyone except me....:(
I don't have ADD, I just- SQUIRREL!!!




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*Cries* :(
Why am I not in there? You forgot about me! :( *cries more*
Nah, just kidding, nice story, loved it.
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Sounds like fun, sorry I missed the party. :D About a half... well, no, not a half, more like a third... well, okay, closer to a twentieth of the people I love were there. But that's just because a lot of people are very lovable. Anyway, I loved it, despite the errors that AM pointed out. I haven't laughed that hard since...

Well, if I'm honest, around two 'o'clock this morning. But this was funnier, anyhoo.
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