Blood Tears (Chapter 11)

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The next morning I was rudely awoken by a blinding light shinning down on me and sounds of hangers clanking agents each other. I sat up and groaned at the the lager six on the clock. The closet Door slid shut with a loud bang and my glare turned on the cocky, no good, bastard, Seth. "What the hell are you doing up at six in the fucken morning?" I asked, rubbing the sleep out of my eyes.
No answer.
"Hey are you even listening?!" I grabbed my pillow and chucked it a crossed the room, hitting him in the back.
Seth turned around slowly as his eyes moved from me to the pillow then back to me, "Was that suppose to hurt?"
"Maybe."
He shook his head and continued getting dressed.
Too tired to fight with him I laid back down and tried to go back to sleep (It wasn't working.) With another groan I rolled out of bed and stormed to the light switch, flipped it off, and went back to bed.
'Finally, darkness again.' I smirked to myself and closed my eyes. Just as I was about to fall asleep the light was turned on again. I opened my eye to see Seth, wearing nothing but his boxer, smirking in triumph at me.
"If you wish to keep your man hood, I suggest you turn off the light." I threatened, sitting up to give him a mischievous look. He shook his head his playful smirk still on his lips.
I stood up and walked toward him and turned it off myself. I noticed his eye twitch and a small sense of victory filled me up inside. Once again the light came on and the feeling inside me vanished as I gritted my teeth together.
"Oh what's wrong doll face?" he asked, giving me the puppy dog eyes.
"DROP DEAD!" I snapped, moving my hand back to the switch. Seth grabbed it and pulled me away. Kicking and scratching I managed to away from his grip, only to have him throw me on his bed and pin me down under him.

"Is everything alright in here-" asked Ryan as he stopped in mid sentence to see Seth half naked, hovering over me. His face turned bright red as he backed away quickly, apologizing for him interrupting.
"No!" I shrieked, shoving Seth off of me and chased after my stupid cousin so that I could explain the situation. When I came back in the bedroom Seth was done dressing and was retreating into the living room. He didn't glance at me or give some sarcastic comment. He couldn't be that mad at me, it was his fault after all.
I followed him into the living where both Ryan and Deven were sitting in front of the television, mindlessly eating their breakfast. Did everyone get up with the roosters? I walked into the kitchen to get something to eat.
Seth stood in the conner of the room holding a black can which he sipped on, quietly staring at me as I grabbed a plate and loaded it with eggs and bacon, "Can I help you?" I asked Seth, shoving a face full of eggs in my mouth.
He made a disgusted sound as he he looked away, "Chew before you speak." He chugged the rest of his drink and walked out the door before I could reply.
I joined the other two and asked them what was Seth so up set about. They just shrugged their shoulders too busy watching the football game to care. Bored out of my mind I collected the dirty dishes and cleaned them before going to bathroom to take a bath. I took off my night clothes and turned on the water. Once the tub was full I got in.
The water felt amazing on my stiff muscles, it was nice to have some peace on quite once and while. I've never felt so relaxed. unfortunately my mini spa didn't last very long. Not even half way through my bath the door burst open. "Get out!" I yelled, ducking deeper into the bubbly water.
"Oh shut up you whiny little brat." Hissed Seth as he turned on one of the shower, stripped off his outfit and getting in.
Cursing to myself I finished washing the shampoo out of my thick hair and applied the conditioner as the door opened again. This time Deven came in to get in the other shower, Ryan running in shortly after him to go do his business on the toilet.
Seth stepped out of the shower just as I was wrapping the towel around my shivering body, "Please get out all of you..." I begged. I hated when I begged it made me feel childish and weak, but desperate times call for desperate messieurs. Seth got in my face and snapped at me about how it was their bathroom and that I had no right to kick them out of it. That was it he had to go and push me way over the edge...
SMACK! My hand collided with the side of his angelic face. Time stood still as we stood there in the middle of the white room glaring at each other, our eye full of hate. Seth's body was quivering as his eyes changed from ice blue to a deep crimson. He gripped me by my neck and lifted me up off the floor. I gasped for air wrapping my hands around his wrist, digging my nails deep into his skin until beads of blood dripped off his arm and on to the floor.
"Seth let her go." pleaded Ryan. With a flick of Seth's wrist he threw me a crossed the room. I landed hard on my knees and watched in horror as his eyes changed back to normal. He looked down at me as many emotions played a crossed his face: Hate, humor, triumph, and pure pleasure.
"What the hell are you?" I growled. He didn't answer, just licked the blood off his hand and disappeared out the door with Deven and Ryan at his heels. I was alone again. I crawled under the skin and hugged my knees as tears pored out of my eyes.

A.N. Hey Guys Hope You liked Chapter 11. plz tell me if I made any spelling mistakes. Also I don't know when the 12th chapter will be up because I am rewriteing for the 3rd time sooo yeah... sorry!




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Hey GothicButterfly. This chapter was brilliant. You had some small spelling mistakes like...
The next morning I was rudely awoken by a blinding light shinning down on me and sounds of hangers clanking agents each other.

You wrote agents, I think you wanted to say against

I saw a couple of more, small minor mistakes but I can't find the anymore, sorry. I suggest you read over, it helps sometimes.

Is Seth a somekind of supernatural creature? I can't wait to discover.
Could you PM me when the next chapter comes out? I'm looking forward to reading it:)

Ikafe :wink:
"Even in the darkness, my heart will you..."
"How do you escape from yourself?"
"...open your eyes, and see..."

Ikafe



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