Simple Memories

Simple Memories

Piece by piece I keep forgetting,
How you look and how you talk.
I don’t have a single memory,
So help me remember you.

Simple memories of you…
I only need a few…
Tomorrow I might not even remember…
Your name…

Please help me remember,
Who you are and what you need.
I don’t have a single memory,
So help me remember you.

Simple memories of you…
I only need a few…
Tomorrow I might not even remember…
Your name…

Yesterday I realized,
That your eyes are blue.
I have a single memory,
And I still try to remember you.

Simple memories of you…
I only have a few…
Tomorrow I might even remember…
Your name…
Ye-ah…

I have to agree. Anyone can relate to this. It's sweet, fragile, and simple :]

Hi there

General comments

I really liked it. As the above comments said anyone who reads can relate to it. I can relate better because I am kind of in the same situation. the message of this song was very clear which I liked a lot.

Rhyme and Rhythm

The rhyme scheme used is pretty simple, but is good for this song. It was not rhyming too much and neither was it too little, it was just perfect. The rhythm was also good. The song flowed pretty well in my head.

Overall

Overall I think the song was pretty good. It was simple and straight forward. I liked it very much.

Good Job

Keep Writing

~Anshita