Don't follow the light...

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Don't follow the light...

Verse 1: I'm running through the forest,
Crying, screaming after you,
It seems like you can't hear me.

Verse 2: I'm alive,
But you don't belong in this world anymore,
Please just don't follow the light.

Chorus: I love you so much.
I won't be able to live without you.
So please just don't follow the light.
Don't cross over, to a world far away from here,
Where I can't reach you.
You're everything to me.
So please just stop.
Don't follow the light.

Verse 3: Why did we have to fight?
Why did I distracted you on this night?
It all feels like it's my fault.
It all feels like I killed you.

Verse 4: The Angels are all,
Back there where it happened,
Trying to keep me alive.
I can't say a word.
You're lying there beside me unmoving,
You're pale white and not breathing anymore.
But you can't do this to me.

Chorus: I love you so much.
I won't be able to live without you.
So please just don't follow the light.
Don't cross over, to a world far away from here,
Where I can't reach you.
You're everything to me.
So please just stop.
Don't follow the light.

Verse 5: You have to fight the light,
You have to fight the urge to follow it.
You can't leave me here all alone.
Turn around, try to go back.

Verse 6: Please just stop,
Don't take another step,
Don't go further.
Please hear me out.
Just try to remember who I am,
At least show me your face for the last time.

Verse 7: I know I won't last without you.
I'll find a way to be with you again,
As soon as I can.

Verse 8: I'm running through the forest,
Screaming your name.
I feel all the agony, all the pain.
And I whisper my last promise,
Through the wind to you,
I'll be with you again,
I'll find a way because,
I love you.
Last edited by Ikafe on Sun Apr 11, 2010 1:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"Even in the darkness, my heart will you..."
"How do you escape from yourself?"
"...open your eyes, and see..."

Ikafe




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Very touching, very moving. Reminds me a lot of some stuff thats going on in my life...

One thing I caught, In Verse three...

Ikafe wrote:Verse 3: Why did we have to fight?
Why did I distracted you on this night?
It all feels like it's my fault.
It all feels like I killed you.


'Distracted' should be 'distract', right? Or am I missing some deeper connection? (Lyrics aren't my specialty... :oops: )

Anyway, it was beautiful!

- G




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Hey there

Very good song you got there. You are a very good writer. Everything flowed so well. The rhyme scheme used for this song was perfect. The rhythm was very good. It flowed very well in my head (I even made a tune for it. :D ) Anyways, so yeah..overall I would say the song is really good. Good job.

Keep Writing

~Anshita
If love is rude to you, be rude to love.



Sometimes I'm terrified of my heart; of its constant hunger for whatever it is it wants. The way it stops and starts.
— Poe