Ryan and I got off the jet as soon as it landed and grabbed our bags. The campus was huge, it wouldn't be hard to get lost here.
"Come on, I'll show you to your room." spoke Ryan as he started to head for a large, gray stone building with me close at his heels. We strolled up the stairs to the second floor and down the hall until we stop at a black door with the number 666 nailed to in, 'how ironic.' I thought to myself.
"You'll be sharing a room with us." Ryan informed me as he pulled out a old fashioned sliver key from his back pocket and inserted it into the keyhole.
"Fun." I muttered under my breath as the door opened and we walked in. The dorm was simple; a kitchen with stainless steel appliances and a wooden table, just large enough to fit for chairs around it. We continued into the living room, in here I found a 30X30 flat screen T.V. with a Wii and play station 3 hooked up to it. The furniture conceited of a black leather couch, love-seat, and an over stuffed armchair circling around a glass coffee table. On the CD racks next to the T.V. was a verity of my favorite DVD's and video games.
"I could get use to this." I emitted, plopping down on the love-seat.
"That's not all." Chuckled Ryan walking into the small hallway were three more black doors stood, "The room to your left is yours and Seth's. The one to our right is mine and Deven's, and the middle one is the bathroom." he informed me, pointing to each one as he spoke. I nodded as he finished, "Now, go unpack and when the others get here we can go to dinner."
"Kay." I agreed as i dragged my bags into my new room. It was simple looking and kinda reminded me of a hotel room. There were two king sized beds with two end tables on either side of them, on the wall to the right of the door was a smaller room hidden behind sliding mirrors. Inside were racks with hangers and shelfs all over the walls.
'Nice closet.' I complemented, putting my bags inside and closing it behind me. On opposite wall of the white was a think white cretin hanging in the middle of the black wall, 'What's this?' I asked as I brushed back the cretins, reveling a glass door with a boucony that looked over a beautiful garden . I gasped in awe at the sight. It was all like a dream that I didn't want to wake up from, but unfortunately all good dreams eventually turn into nightmares.
"What the hell are you?" hissed a male voice from behind me. I spun around and froze.
I saw some wonderful tags (informed, emitted, chuckled) - and those are good for variety, and keeping dialogue somwhat interesting, or not boring, at least. But, y'know, too much is not too good. Looks odd. Dialogue becomes stiff, jerky.
