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This is another abstract work that I've done!

Wow! That's a lot of color! I'l have to admit it though, the heart doesn't stand out very much, probably because the rest of the picture is just as bright as itself. You could draw a border in one continuous color, or try to darken it a little more. Also, you should get rid of white borders to the left and right.
I'd love it if you re-posted this with a larger image!
Oh, and, what did you use? Crayons?
Jenth

Hey Isha!

I love the colours! There's a lot of it and it's very nice.
One nit picK

At the top right part of the heart, there is a white/flesh tint that you've coloured. It sticks out a bit too much, in an odd way. I wold suggest you to fix it up a little more brightly.
And my opinion is to leave the heart the way it is. It looks good this way.

Anyway, keep drawing!
~Lava

Jenthura wrote:Wow! That's a lot of color! I'l have to admit it though, the heart doesn't stand out very much, probably because the rest of the picture is just as bright as itself. You could draw a border in one continuous color, or try to darken it a little more. Also, you should get rid of white borders to the left and right.
I'd love it if you re-posted this with a larger image!
Oh, and, what did you use? Crayons?
Jenth

Yep! They were crayons! The heart was supposed to be sort of hidden.

I think you did really good on this picture, I like it

Hey Isha!

I commented on your last one of these! Hm... that sounded funny...

Anyway, I loved your first one. But I have to say, I love this one even more! Unlike the first one I reviewed, there is something to focus on in this one. The heart. I think that it's very pretty, and I love the colours that you have used.

One nit-pick I have though is that the heart doesn't really stand out quite enough. You could have used a different colour scheme maybe for the heart, so that it looked different. I know that you said the hear was supposed to be kind of hidden, but I'd have preferred it if it wasn't. That's just a matter of opinion though really!

Overall, I really, really liked this!
I'll definitely be looking out for more of your drawings.

Keep drawing,

xoxo Skins

Wow! This is excellent. I love art but I could never draw or anything like that. I'm more of a tracer. haha.

This is awesome though! I like the colors you used. Post more soon!


Much Love,
Chris

Thanks!! I really don't enjoy making much of a 'scheme'.... it's fun, but going crazy and creating the chaotic seems more....emotional??
Usually I portray emotion in these pieces, my life is messy, but I feel vibrant through it all...
Confused, undecided, yet happy.
That's me!
(Undecided is the reason for the schemlessness... )

Hi Isha. i loved the colour combinations and the patterns you created. Though I'd have to agree with Jenthura that the heart doesn't stand out. Had he not mentioned it, I wouldn't have even notice it. Anyways, it is so lurid and beautiful. Thumbs up to you!

Thanks!! I'm still confused as to how the heart not standing out bugs people though... I think it adds more effect when it's hidden. It portrays more emotion, more secrecy...more in the mind of me...

I think this is what art is all about, being original. Anyway I really like this, I love how the heart is hidden and how all the colors go along with one another. Dang I can't type right haha anyway....this is just plain amazing to me.

Keep Drawing

-Flower-

Well I sat staring at the piece for about three minutes until I finally noticed the heart. It was probably the crazy colors (but good!). I was kind of shocked it really took me that long to see it, but abstract art always gets my mind wandering. Good job, but I wish the picture was a bit bigger.

~Day

Wow. Hey, there. I love abstract art, really, I do, I just can't do it! Love this, though. The bright colors make it seem so childish--like a first love, added with the secrecy of having to find the heart (took me all but two seconds!). When I see this, I see a young girl and a boy--bright colors, summer, young love, secrecy--and in one word, it is beautiful.
Nice job.
-Mizz

wow, wow. this looks so cool. i love how it shows a heart in the middle. it's so colorful, and pretty. (:

Wow! Thanks guys!! I'm glad you liked these so much!! I'll try figuring out how to make it bigger...
In the mean time, I think I'll make some more! They're really fun to do!