The lines are as straight as they are on the card, and the whole thing is tilting 9which might be because of the paper) and you got some of the distances wrong. All three of those things add up to confuse her expression. on the card she looks angry, but in the picture she could look angry or surprised or happy. Trying narrowing the eyes more and lessening the space between the bottom of the eyes and the nose. Plus, shading around the eyes-nose area would help a lot, as of now it's a rather flat shape. Hope I helped! Jenth
Jenth Neji is a guy, but besides that I agree with you. The facial expression is spot on, but his head band is oddly proportioned and square. Really nice though. I've tried to draw off the cards too and mine don't come out nearly as nice as yours did.
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This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.
I'd start but then I don't think I'd be able to stop
*not saying that is bad, because it's not. I actually think its good, but when you compare it to the card there are a lot of things off and that's what i was talking about above.
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Thank you for the reviews. The reason it is tilted is because i switched my position and was looking at it sideways half way through. Therefor the drawing looks like a sideways version. I saw that about the face and tried to fix it and I just couldn't figure it out. It kind made me mad haha. Anyway anymore reviews?
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.
This is really good, but from the actual version to the side of your drawing, the eyebrows are supposed to be closer together, and yes it's slightly tilted. But never the less, your shading could be a improved slightly. Shouldn't the hair dangling by each side of his face have little bobbles? This would look really good coloured in and 3d. The eyes look pretty cool though. Well done!
~MysticalBlood
'This isn't funny Dean, the voice says i'm almost out of minutes!' - Castiel ~ Nothing is true, everything is permitted... Live by the Creed... Be Discreet...
If you ask me, this is really pretty good! I also love drawing Manga, so that's a plus. Although, I'm not the best at it.
I do agree with what the other reviewers have said though. The drawing is definitely tilted slightly. You've explained the reason for this though, so I understand. Also, in some places, your shading is a bit off. The shading on the hair for example, could be a bit more subtle as it changes from light to dark. Like someone else said, you could improve the shading around the nose as well.
Overall, you definitely have potential! All that you need to do is read what us reviewers have said, and you'll end up with a really good drawing.
