Mind Explosion Comic Strip

This took six hours
Oh. yea there's aline on the top half of the comic... errr i forgot to add that out. Eek I'm sorry! Pretend like it's not even there
Yes, yes I know. I was just so bored... you know Saturdays... hmph
What do you tihnk about it? Tell me all opinions.
Criticize/rate ! :]

ha ha the colours look amazing and it's quite funny! It seemed like you had to cramp the writing on, therefore making it hard for me to read. But i did like this, it's something that took you a lot of effort to create, so i say well done for that. Loving it anyway, even if it is slightly confusing, keep drawing!

~MysticalBlood

Hey pacific!

This is really cool in my opinion! I really like the idea of it, it's funny. It's kind of random, but I love it.

It was kind of hard to understand though, I had to read it a few times to get what was going on. I think that's just because you kind of squeezed the writing in, like MysticalBlood said.

Overall, I did really like this! You've obviously put a lot of effort into this, and it shows. You should definitely do more of these.

Keep drawing,

xoxo Skins

Lol.....I don't get it..... It was cute though

This is cute as!!!

A few tips; maybe you could try and write a little bigger, because in certain sections, it was very difficult to decipher, and a lot of the message was lost in the time it took to understand. So, instead of putting little speech bubbles in afterwards, maybe you could plan out little captions down the bottom, so you have room to write explanations.

I loved the brightness of this, great colours! The drawings themselves are very cute, the only face that looks a little strange is the girls in the first slide. Apart from that, loved it! (Especially his face at the end slide).

Keep posting.

~Mo.

Haha, i know!
On my other computer, I have a file saved up that's a better version of this... I'll get too that soon.
Ya I know isn't it a bit confusing! :] Sorry, I guess writer's block hit me everywhere!