Drawing of a guy..

HMmmmm. yep I know it seems like all I write about is guys but I won't lie, they're my obsession. The good news is that I'm into just one and that's good because he's into me. Anyways I drew this picture not too long ago maybe like two weeks- and well it needs critizing,commenting...and rating- well if you like it you can rate it. lalalal
~P.S. Did I mention to critize? :]

Hey there Pacific!

I like this. You definitely have talent, here. Overall, the picture is quite good.

Face: I think you did a very good job on his face. Everything is nicely in balance; the only problem I have is his nose. I don't know how exactly to explain it, but it's a tad out of place. Maybe because the rest of your drawing is a bit sketchier, and the nose looks like it was a one-line, one-shot deal. It certainly works the way it is, but making it less prominent could serve to better his face.

Body: His body (mainly his arms) are a bit flat. There aren't any creases or anything, be it where the elbows bend or even at the armpits. His torso is fine, but his pants seem like they were drawn on later. They begin to narrow towards the end, and they're flat, like the arms.

Hair: Very nice =] Maybe a bit voluminous, but I like the layering.

Teddy Bear: Aw, so cute! I like that it has depth. It looks very cuddly, and the cheeks are just... aw! The only problem is whatever is on his tummy... not quite sure what it's supposed to say.

Grass- I feel like you did this in layers, am I correct? You drew the grass a row of blades at a time? It shows, here and there, and can be a bit distracting. If you had made their location a bit more sporadic so that they blended together, that would have been better. And, I don't quite get that thing at the top left corner. It doesn't seem to go very well. I think that you should just leave the entire background as grass.

Overall- I really liked it! The expression on his face is portrayed well, and the overall impression is nice. Just those few things need to be fixed. Hope I helped, and keep drawing! I'd love to see more of your work.

-Sam

Hey. This was good. I like the face. The arms are sticking out a little funny though. One sleeve is way longer than the other one. His legs are sort of awkward too. I like the facial expression though. He looks like he's so lost in love. Cool pic. *likes*

-Crescent

Wow this is truly amazing, you can tell it's a guy. But unfortunately, he looks as though he's just been mown flat buy a lawn mower ha ha. I love your colouring though, but you could try to give this drawing some depth. Plus the chest muscles i see through the top looks odd. You should rub them out.

Overall this is a great picture, the teddy bear is cute.

keep it up!

~iCarlyfan