Such innocent eyes, I truly despise
You
So evil
You are
So callous.
These lines confused me...
Is it like "I truely despise you! So evil, you are, so callous!"
Or is it more like, "I truely despise you! You are so evil! You are so callous!"
I got confused. I liked this poem otherwise... Very dark with the word innocence in it though, but good.
Theblackrose - I'm sure that's exactly the same thing that you wrote twice, just in a different way lol Anyone else? Or is it so dreadful it doesn't deserve comments???
