Isabel

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I love you.
I have never met you,
But I love you.
You see, I do know you.
Though they will say I don’t.
I picture you.
Often.
Blonde hair.
Blue eyes.
But chances are,
You don’t look like that.
I don’t care.
I still love you.
In my eyes,
You are perfect.
I pray for you.
For a long time,
I did
And I will continue to.
I hope to meet you,
Because I helped save you.
But if I don’t,
No matter.
I still love you.
"Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be."
-Abe Lincoln
"If only I had an enemy bigger than my apathy I could've won."
- " I Gave You All" by Mumford and Sons




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This is a very thought provoking poem. It makes one wonder what the back story behind it is. It is very pretty. :)
Not with things as they are, but with things as they might be and ought to be.
-Aristotle




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I agree with Toto25, it is a very thought provoking poem. It reminds me of a mother thats given up her child...not sure why. Other guesses would be a soulmate or something...haha :D
Most people see what is and never what can be. - Albert Einstein




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yes,I agree with the above

It does sound like it is based on personal experience of some sort? If it isnt then you have got a great mind XD.

This poem is very simple yet it works really well. XD

I hope you keep on writing.

However there is one bit i don't quite understand....'I saved your life'!

I
I wrote your name in the sand and the sea washed it away! I wrote your name in my heart and there it will stay.



"In my contact with people I find that, as a rule, it is only the little, narrow people who live for themselves, who never read good books, who do not travel, who never open up their souls in a way to permit them to come into contact with other souls -- with the great outside world."
— Booker T. Washington, Up From Slavery