Here we go again... (part 1)

I look up at Sheryll. She has a murderous look on her face. Tears slide down my cheek as the icy feeling of guilt spreads through me. The bruises on my arms throb as she picks me up roughly. I know where I am going. I sort through my brain trying to understand why I deserve this. I watch her pull out a key and unlock the Door. Now that I am being thrownin there I remember that I am the second one
The first was annabel. She spat in Fathers face when he asked her to do another one of her endless chores. I don't squirm as sheryll takes me to my destination. I am scared she will beat me again. Or the other thing father calls 'playing'. I don't know what to call it. Rape? Mollestation? Who cares. Here we go again...

Continue it more Olli! Haha it's good. Or actually, you should add more in the beginning and have what you've got now as the ending. O: xo

yeah it was a bit short! do more! i liked it!

Hi!
Well, including the fact that is the first part you should tell something about the character itself, not to start from the action. But firmly believe that this chapter is unfinished and will correct it. Moreover it is too little to be a story or just a chapter.
Maria

Hey-oh!

People have already said it, but this is a little short. Who is talking? How did they get in this situation? What happens next? Has it happened before? A little more information and a continuation of the story would be nice. You have an intriguing start: follow up on it!

There's some capitalization and punctuation things I'll point out really quick:

- All characters' names need to be capitalized, all the time. You capitalized "Sheryll" the first time, but not the second. And "Father", when being used as a name, should be capitalized too.

- Possessives need to have apostrophes. "Fathers face" = "Father's face".

Really short, but interesting. I'd like to see what you do with this if you were to expand it a bit. Let us get inside the situation. What brought it to this point? Keep going!

~GryphonFledgling