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A Haiku

fire_of_dawn

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Fri Feb 19, 2010 4:17 am

fire_of_dawn says... · Fri Feb 19, 2010 4:17 am

Yes, even I have been infected by the haiku bug. Here goes.

Give me a minute
And I'll change your life, just watch.
Two, and we'll see. Right?

"Do? I'll tell you what we'll do! We'll be ready!"
Matthias, from Redwall

"Life consists of doing the impossible."
Brother Fir, The Heir of Mistmantle

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Durriedog

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Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:54 am

Durriedog says... · Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:54 am

Hey! I like it. The only nitpick -

'Two, and we'll see. Right?'

Two what?

Keep writing!

~Durr :smt023

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Pacific_Sky14

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Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:32 pm

Pacific_Sky14 says... · Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:32 pm

I agree with Durrie!

Two what? I don't really know haiku's, but it's alright!!^>^

Come sail the stars with me
Through the sky not through the sea
Come sail the stars with me
Take me hand and make believe
Come sail the stars with me
Through the sky not through the sea
Come sail the stars with me
Take me hand and make believe~JT Lloyd

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