From The Arms of Our Fathers

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verse 1;
Silent cold, stand strong,
let no fears show, let no words slip.
Break no composure, face down the tide,
silent cold, stand strong.
chorus;
From the arms of our fathers, to the end of the sky,
tread the path we follow, hold your head high.
Fight back fear, for so did he,
from the arms of our fathers, believe in me.
verse 2;
Legacies, beliefs, we stand in this world,
from the arms of our fathers, we wait for relief.
We walk to salvation, we walk to the end,
we walk for the fallen, we walk to ascend.
chorus;
From the arms of our fathers, to the end of the sky,
tread the path we follow, hold your head high.
Fight back fear, for so did he,
from the arms of our fathers, believe in me.
breakdown;
I am the legacy you left behind, I am a remnant of us,
I am a shard of hope, I am, I am.
I am the king of cups, who brought the world down,
I am the endless sea, I am fear.
I am the one who you'll never forget, I am the one who holds no regret,
from the arms of our fathers, i am the stars.
chorus;
From the arms of our fathers, to the end of the sky,
tread the path we follow, hold your head high.
Fight back fear, for so did he,
from the arms of our fathers, believe in me.
Believe in me.
XxXxX




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this is pretty awesome stuff. does it have a deeper meaning? is there a story behind it? let me know. you have a talent for lyrics so keep it up.




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Hello! I'm not very good with these critiques. But, I really loved this! I wish there was a way to hear the songs with music or with someone singing it. Still, I feel like I don't need to because I felt in my heart. Wow, sorry that was really cheesy but very true :lol: . Great job!




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I wrote this for my grandfather when he went into hospital last year, to clear my head and get it out of it. Me and my band are gunna be going over it soon, so hopefully I can get it somehwere where you guys can here it.
And thanks, it means a lot :]
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sweet!! PM me when you get ANY of your stuff recorded!! great job!
The talent of an amazing writer, they can convey any emotion, make you feel thing's you've never felt, and help you understand that which you thought you never would.

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