Ode to Sare Agama

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icanbefixed
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Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:48 am
icanbefixed says... · Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:48 am
We were in chat, and I decided to write in haikus... This is something I spun up, quickly and talented-ly. (lol)

I think Sare's a beast,
we all know it's true, correct?
we must raise our hands.

(in agreement)
The hardest mountain to climb will have the greatest view. Everything at a different angle: memories serve as double vision, a view from the valleys as well as the precipice. But everything that goes up must come down.The descent from the peak will be twice as graceful & three times as difficult
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Thu Feb 18, 2010 2:37 am
fiction903 says... · Thu Feb 18, 2010 2:37 am
You have an interesting poem. I hope you entered it in the writing Olympics. It is so vague thought I think you could change the second line around a little so it describes the topic. I have never heard of something being a haiku and an ode at the same time. Its a unique concept.Other than being extremely vague I think you did well. Keep writing and have a great night. Fiction
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Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:48 pm
fire_of_dawn says... · Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:48 pm
People are writing poetry about my sister?
I was not informed of this! Just kidding. A very well-written poem.
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