Not That Girl

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dasiamari
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Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:13 pm
dasiamari says... · Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:13 pm
I'm not that kind of girl that goes for everything
I'm not the kind of girl who sings when you say sing

I'm not that kind of girl (oh)
Not that kind of girl (no)
I won't change who I am
I'll do all that I can

And you're the kind of guy that doesn't understand
You're the kind of guy who will try to change who I am
You need to open your eyes
'Cause you can't change me

Not that kind of girl that goes for everything
not that kind of girl who sing when you say sing

I'm not that kind of girl (oh)
Not that kind of girl(no)
Last edited by dasiamari on Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:57 am, edited 1 time in total.
Know that she's back in the atmosphere I'm afraid that she'll think of me as a plain old Jain told a story 'bout a man who was to afraid to fly so he never did land. ~Train
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Pacific_Sky14
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Sun Feb 14, 2010 7:51 pm
Pacific_Sky14 says... · Sun Feb 14, 2010 7:51 pm
Wow, that sounds great! Just add an "s" after the first "sing" in the second line. :) Nice job. You should continue writing this!
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Come sail the stars with me
Through the sky not through the sea
Come sail the stars with me
Take me hand and make believe
Come sail the stars with me
Through the sky not through the sea
Come sail the stars with me
Take me hand and make believe~JT Lloyd
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The idea that a poem was a made thing stayed with me, and I decided then that I wanted to be an artist, not just a diarist. So I put myself through a kind of apprenticeship in writing poetry, and I understood even then that my practice as a poet was deeply related to my reading.
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