I'll Get Mine

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He does look good all dressed in blues,
but I like boys in ACU's.
With dirty boots and digi gear,
and sounding off, you got all clear.
Oohrah that, and Oohrah this,
you put me in a state of bliss.
So scream your jodi, double time,
and please tell me that I'll get mine.




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This is pretty good! I enjoyed the rhyme, although it was somewhat confusing for me. *lame review*



akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
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