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I'mma put these in spoiler tags because there are a lot.

Please, feel free to tell me what I could do to become a better photographer. Tell me which pictures you like the most, and which ones that could've been better.

Some were taken with a point and shoot, some were taken with a Canon Rebel XT.

Taken with a point and shoot:

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My little cousin. We were upstate, in the Adirondacks. <3


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Also from that trip upstate.


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Drew a heart in red sharpie, put an ice cube on it before it could dry. Let the ice cube slide.


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A glow in the dark star. : D


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I have an obsession with stars. This is what's on the inside of a sand dollar. Pretty, huh?


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Swing chain.


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My metrocard, chapstick, perfume, a hairclip, and a star.


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Pictures taken with the Canon:

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My doggieee.


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It snowed a lot on wednesday. :]


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My 8th grade class of 2010 ring.


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If you want to see more, here's my dA: http://x-kitkat-x.deviantart.com/

Felt like I should contribute something other than writing because I'm sick, and me writing while sick is a baaaaaaad idea.




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Wow these photos are beautiful! I'm no expert on photography so I'm just here to review :) I really like the ones you took with point and shoot :) I have to take picture for my yearbook class to enter in the fair so these gave me some good ideas. Great job!

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these rock :}
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Hello, I am AspiringAuthorA..M. and shall be your reviewer for tonight.

Wow, some of your pictures are quite spectacular. But, a few do have issues. And, some are exceptionally nice. In no particular order or meaning:

1. A few are quite dull. A star on a piece of line paper is not particular awe inspiring.

2. Some are much too zoomed in.

3. The picture of your dog was nice in a sense. I found the tail being clearly visible, while it's head is out of focus to be quite a nice touch. It gave the impression that the dogs mind was lost in its sleep.

4. At least three of your pics were absolutely gorgeous. I particularly liked the one with the leaves littering the ground on a long stretch of road at a low angle.

Keep photographing, but do try and keep the lenses a little more zoomed back. Cloe ups are nice, but they can easily be overdone.

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These pictures are fantastic! My favorites are the one of your cousin, I liked it because it was a candid which is my favorite pictures because they show a story. Like this one did, it showed the story of a curious child. And the sand dollar it was just beautiful! I can't wait to see more of your work!
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Am I allowed to use some of these?
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Thank you everyone. ^-^

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Wow! For all of these photos my jaw was down. They are truly wonderful.
This is amazing work, very beautiful. The one with the swing is my favorite for one reason. Reason- it reminded me of when I was little when I just used to swing and look up at the heavens. Or close my eyes to savor the moments, while the winds would wash upon my face. Thank you for making me relive them.
And I hope to see more of your works. :smt003
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very nice *follows on DA*
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You're a very good photograph. These photos are amazing. All of them.
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My favorite is the swing! I miss swinging in the playground...:) looking up at either the puffy clouds that looked my aunt's cats or stars that were as bright as the sun....I like the skittles on too. My third favorite is the red leaves on the walkway, that was really good. You are a very talented photographer. You take them at angles I haven't really seen other people take. I feel sort of jealous...Hahaha :) Super job!
P.s. What camera do you own?
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