Say Hello to my Little Friend!!!

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My nemesis,
I found him.
Or rather he
surprised me.
It was the reflective
surface that gave him
away really.
Staring him down,
I waited for
just the right moment.
Then I pounced.
He scurried away
and I followed.
I must trap him
I thought, but how?
Aha! Penning him
in I ran in search
of a better weapon.
Wielding my new
arsenal we faced off
once again.
Whack! Went my shoe.
I scraped the
cockroach off and
resumed washing my face.
Last edited by thehobbitgangster on Wed Feb 10, 2010 12:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Ha! Nice, I liked it!

Only thing: "He scurried away also" the 'also' is an unneeded word, 'tis my opinion that the poem would flow better without it.

Keep writing!

~Mel
"Don't say 'the old lady screamed'- bring her on and let her scream." -Mark Twain

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Oh thanks!!
A man can change his stars.
William Thatcher ~ "A Knight's Tale"

Just because I'm losing, doesn't mean I'm lost ~ Lost! by Coldplay




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I love it! Very surprising, and I like the way the title foreshadows the end.



I will not allow my life's light to be determined by the darkness around me.
— Sojourner Truth