Within--Clairity within Harmony of Self

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TheStoicTraveler89
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Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:10 pm
TheStoicTraveler89 says... · Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:10 pm
Gather yourself and head towards the unknown
Bear no fear or anxiousness at why lies ahead

The answer is within

Rest your mind and find serenity in the chaos
Hold no worry to what great mysteries remain unsolved

The answer is within

Collect your emotions and live in harmony with uncertainty
Seek nothing in what was always never to be understood

The answer is within

The answers to the past...
to the present...
to the future...

Always within
Ridentem dicere verum quid vetat
"What prevents me from speaking the truth with a smile?"
-Horace(Satires)

“Stop talking about what the good person should be, and just be that person.”
-Marcus Aurelius
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MegaLizardLord
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:42 am
MegaLizardLord says... · Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:42 am
Fantastic! That actually inspired me to work harder and never give up. :lol: This so far is one of my favorite poems.
What the heck does WTH mean?!
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MattJF
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Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:11 am
MattJF says... · Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:11 am
Hi StoicTraveler

Your poemwas very inspiring. It makes you think about the bigger questions and also makes the reader answer questions about yourself. I think that you are a very talented poet and I look forward to reading more of your work. If you have any questions please PM me and I will be happy to help. Your poetry reminded me of a favourite poet of mine called Rainer Maria Rilke. I think you would enjoy his work.
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You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
— Metatron