Sorry for bad quality and if i had a scanner i would use it but i don't... ah damn. is the picture side ways? ooopsies.... hope it's not that bad and i know his jaw isn't as long as it's supposed to be. i drew it ages ago.
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'This isn't funny Dean, the voice says i'm almost out of minutes!' - Castiel ~ Nothing is true, everything is permitted... Live by the Creed... Be Discreet...
Hello, I like the eyes, as it's very realistic. I think the shading on the eyebrows is really cool too. The lips are pointed a little downwards, so you know, you may want to change it, may not. The ear is quite cool, but it kind of looks like it's falling of the head, still, it's alright =) The hair is absoulutely lovely, you can tell that it's definately Edwawrd. I mean, if you hadn't titled it I would've known that it was Edward! Well Done! ~tam_ara p.s- I've seen you manga work, I haven't commented, but I think it's great!!!!!!!
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.
thank youuu!!! his lips are suppposed to be downwards lolz.
'This isn't funny Dean, the voice says i'm almost out of minutes!' - Castiel ~ Nothing is true, everything is permitted... Live by the Creed... Be Discreet...
HA! My little sister has a poster in her room with that guy. It looks just like that poster. But, as for the flaws of your drawing, the left side of the face seems overly shaded. I understand that you may have been going for a shadowy look, but the execution doesn't quite work out. Maybe if you lighten up the shading?
And also, the left eye is noticeably flatter than that on the left.
Other than that nice drawing. I'll probably have to show it to my sister.
"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?” -John 11:25-26
Ooh, very detailed! I like! The only things that could be improved are the eyebrows and lips. Well, and, another problem is that he dosn't look a lot like Ed. xD Still, though, you'v got great talent... theres a lot of potential in this piece. Keep working on the eybrows and lips, and add some color, for goodness sakes! ^-^
-M.E.
They say the eyes Are windows to the soul I say the earth The sky The moon The very breath upon my lips All of these Are windows To you
I think the face is a bit wide which makes the eyes too wide. I like it. Oh my gosh, I loved New Moon, didn't you? I'm Team Jacob but I still think Edward's pretty cool, too. I wish I could draw Edward, but sadly I can't because, I don't know I just can't. lol Nice job! ~Skyy.
Come sail the stars with me Through the sky not through the sea Come sail the stars with me Take me hand and make believe Come sail the stars with me Through the sky not through the sea Come sail the stars with me Take me hand and make believe~JT Lloyd
Hey there Carly! 'Tis me again. I love the features once again! You really know how to portray eyes well and the hair detail is coming along swimmingly. My nitpicks here would be that I think you need to adjust his "over-masculine" face - this is down to the somewhat pointy chin and the very straight and broad jaw - into something a little more natural, i.e. smoother curve and blend it a little better into the neck line. I love the ear and the nose though, I think you've carved the lines well. I say "carved" because this brings me onto my other nitpick: Shading. I might've mentioned this before but you need to be more into it with your shading. You need that lower level and then you need to tone it and layer it with harder levels of graphite or lead. This way you can build up complexions and expressions. If you want your images looking realistic that's the way to go. Also I'd have a little play around with the eyebrows, I think they're too "shaped" to be eyebrows. Perhaps disjoint them a little more?
lol Nice job!
