Haiku, anyone?

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How the setting sun
Quietly delights my mind-
Secret of summer.

Haiku : three unrhymed lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, respectively.

-Amice-

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Wow! You're really good at that!

I like the imagery, and how you have really captured the summery spirit. It doesn't sound forced at all.

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I like it. The first two lines are really good, especially. They go really good together.

~Michelle~
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