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Another random pic by me.... As you can see I didn't plan it, as it is on lined paper!
"For none can be Bad without Good to compare us too..."
Coloured with hard pastels.



~ Durrie

Hey Durrie! Wow, that's a really good picture you've drawn there, awesome.

As you so obviously pointed out it is on lined paper... but it's gorgeous anyway I love the dresses, similar, but definitely not the same, as with the wings. Sort of like a mirror? It makes me think of a sort of a parallel self, each looking for one another, or maybe not looking for, but finding each other...

Well that's probably not what you meant for it to mean, but that's kinda how I interpret it. Anyway, I just want to make sure you know, it is beautiful, and it even has a tiny elephant dancer dancing for it, because it is so wonderful.

Hrmm... well this wasn't much of a review... aw well.

P.S. the drawing is gorgeous!

~Gen

*likes*

Wow, Durrie! This is totally awesome!

Only thing I found a bit odd - The Dark Winged girls back leg looks a big wide, and starts a tad too high up her dress. Apart from that though, it's totally fantastic, and the wings are amazing.

Great Job! Thanks for posting.

Keep writing.. err.. drawing!



~Mo.

Hi again Durrie!

Wow, I really love this drawing. It's really good! Though if you could put up a slightly bigger picture, it'd be better.

Anyway, a few points for you to consider (And I shall be calling them Light and Dark for reference):
1. Light's leg that sticks out seems unnatural. I think it's because you haven't really defined it well.
2. Dark's neck is a little too fat/thick. If you look carefully at where the hair's pulled up, you'll realize the neck doesn't go up so. It has a curve and then joins the head.

That's about it. I love the colors you have used.

EDIT:
I agree with what Mo about the leg. Also; I love the way you've given curves to both of them differntly.
Keep up the awesomosity!
~Laav

Rawr! Evil house!! I'm going to do this if it kills me!

Okay so Right Angel- Her leg's a bit too think, seeing as her arms are so thin. Also her hair is pulled back too far, and it makes it look like she's balding. So you might want to add some more hair down where her head meets her neck, so she doesn't look so much like an Orc from Lord of the Rings . Her outfit and wings are to die for...I love them.

Left Angel- Her I guess it would be left hand, looks kind of long and flipper like. Her dress and wings are incredibly awesome too, and I love her armband.

Great job!

~Hope

I like this picture :)
There are a few things though. The dark angel's neck and butt looks a little too big. Also, the shape of the wings themselves just look really strange to me. Like, wings wouldn't curve like that. I do like the design on them and the whole outcome of the picture is quite nice. Kudos to you ^_^

Good job on the bend of their knees. The detail is good too. I don't know how you made it so semetrical, it's amazing! That's all I have to say.
*likes* a lot!

I love your drawing it has so much meaning to it I love how their hands are touching

Thanks all!!! Love you guys!

Wow Durrie!

I really like this, well done. Yes it's on lined paper but hey everyone likes to doodle and this was very good. I like the contrast and I could clearly see the light and dark good and bad thing going on so well done!

A 'like' for you!

I would usually say Keep Writing at this point but that dosn't apply here so...
Keep Drawing!
~Lydia

i like this picture. It states the obvious. I love how you explained it...

"For none can be Bad without Good to compare us too...

this is very mind compelling. I would like to see it without the lines but it is also as good with them. Kinda like how you said "For none can be Bad without Good to compare us too...(god i love this qoute) This picture cant be bad without another one like it to compare it to although i think that this would probably be the best

Yeller! This is amazing.

I disagree with everyone else. I like her big leg, I like her curves. It makes her different from the other angel! I mean, not all angels are skinny and perfect, right? Please keep it that way.

I really like the drawing as a whole. I like how they are almost identical in their expressions, their stance, but different at the same time.

The only thing I didn't like, though small, was how the angel on the right is closer to the line. I think they should be equal.

Classy

Impressssive! Next time, try not to draw on lined paper, because it detracts sooo much from your picture. It's well done, except, on the right, the shell-looking-thing looks a little off at the top, almost as if you need to round it off a little. Did you use pastels? Or crayons? (Also, this inspired me to paint something sort of good/evil)

June

I used hard pastels I use them quite alot, you may be seeing more of my work with them on here... though I usually stuff up soon as colour hits lead xD