Made-Up Character/Name(:

i just made this up.
Sorry for the left over pencil marks, lol, I forgot those.
Overall is it O.K.?

This was a really great drawing! I could totally tell kinda what your story must be about. It is a really awesome drawing and I am so jealous!

I am so jelaous! How come I can't draw like that?
On the other hand this is really great. He looks like a hero doesn't he? I'm gonna wanna read the story this guy belongs to =)
Definately keep it up and keep drawing (and writing) you've got talent my friend!

Love Liz

Good job! It's better than what I can do! Just a few things though:
1. He's a little stiff, maybe make his back curve a little more I don't know
2. His neck is leaning a little too far out.
3. His arm, that doesn't really look like a natural or relaxed position for an arm.

Alright, that's all I can see. Still though, he's really good. You're an awesome artist!

Hey Pacific!

This is a really good drawing you've done, you have talent! I really like the way you have drawn the armour on his body, and it seems you have been careful and haven't rushed it which is good. However, he does look a bit stiff, and I notice the rigid postilion of his neck which doesn't help his overall posture at all. It seems he is facing the wind? So, maybe his stance could have been drawn a little differently to emphasise that point? Also, there could be a little more expression in his face, as it is looking a bit blank at the moment. I see a slight downturn of the brow but you should do more with this so we can get a taste of the emotions he is feeling.

I have nothing majorly bad to say about this, you have done a really good job! Well done

PM me if you have any questions, or want me to review anything else!

-Onyx

I like the way you have drawn this, its kinda Manga/Anime style by the way you ahve done the face and the body. You have some talent, how long did it take you to draw this? Anyway, pencil lines are sometimes good because they add depth and texture to the image.

Forgotten xxx

This is such an awesome picture! I think the lines you drew were very clean and shading and such were very well done.

He is stiff and is standing in a very awkward position. Kind of leaning over/standing all straight. To capture the way someone naturally stands, noticing weight on one leg or the other, a more natural back curve and such is something an artist strives forever to achieve. So don't worry about that too much. Maybe observe people standing like he is, get someone to model and just practise making your people in drawing more natural.

That's all. I like it a lot!!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

Thanks everyone for sharing your opinions. LUUUURRVVVVVE ya! ^.6 Thanks to you, I started drawing better.
~Skyy.

Oh my goodness. That's probably the best armor I've seen in ages. I especially like the - what're they called? Those gloves? Ah, right, I remember now - guantlets. One thing tho; His chest and tummy look a bit large, but other than that, amazing. The expression on his face was wonderful.

Keep it up!

-Kelcia

Hi Pacific. The prince/mediator is cool. I like the face and it's neatly drawn but there's this one thing with his body shape. If he's a muscular man which I think he is make his shoulders more broad and chest a bit wide and bold. I think you understood my point. the shading is amazing!!! Keep sketching!!