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The Ciianthan Truth: Spies

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Simon and Susa

As the fight began, Simon circled around to the back of one dim-looking robber while Susa held the man’s attention.

“So,” She said, flipping her hair out of her eyes. “You rob travelers often?” Simon could feel her irritation. She wished that she had thought of something cleverer to say, he knew it.

“Ur,” said the befuddled robber as Simon crept closer. The others were engaged in the fight right next to them, but he paid little attention.

“I, ur, yeh, we robs ‘em all – Oi!” The cry of alarm came from Simon jumping onto the man’s back and slamming the pommel of his dagger on the crown of the robber’s skull. The man’s eyes rolled slowly into the back of his head, and he collapsed into the dirt at Susa’s feet. She stepped back and grinned at Simon.

“Very nice,” She said. He bowed mockingly.

“Thank you.”
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Hello?
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...Yes?
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Where are the others?
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Oh, I'm sure they'll turn up. It hasn't been that long.
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***Sorry about that. YWS was acting really weird on me; I haven't been able to log in for the past four days 'cause of a stupid "General Error" on the page...really weird.***


Karana leapt into action. She wasn't going down, not this time! She rushed one of the men, bringing her hand up in a palm-attack. A quick thrust, and the man screamed as blood poured from his shattered nose. She took advantage of him, grabbing his sword-hand and holding it stiff. She let her fingers curl into a fist and punched again, snapping his wrist. The man yelled, crumpling into an agonized heap. She easily ripped his sword away from him.

And right in time. Another man had come up on her from behind, sword over his head as if to behead her. She met his attack, swinging fiercly and just quickly enough to block his attack. Their swords clashed, sending off sparks in every direction; she growled, kicking out with her hard-heeled boot.

Not this time, she told herself. They won't take my life from me. They won't ruin it further! Not this time!
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Johnathan

Two bandits laughed at me when they saw I wasn't taking out my sword and came at me. They lifted their swords together, what Muppet's. I rolled between the two grabbing one of the bandits legs. As I came out of the roll I pulled the bandits leg with me causing him to fall on his face. The other bandit spun around surprised but was too late. I grabbed his wrist and heard a satisfying scream as his wrists turned and snapped. Two defenceless bandits it was almost criminal how easy it was. I pulled out my sword and skewred the bandit on the floor as he started to rise.

"wait no.." The other bandit started before I cut him off.




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Any of you guys know where sylverdawn has disappeared off to?

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Linx

By the looks of it there were only two bandits left, but they weren't seeing reason. One of them charged Atila and the leader charged Nyk.

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Maybe that'll get sylverdawn back. :P
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With my viewing this you now have 666 views. The mark of the beast. :twisted: According to Christian beliefs. :wink:

Studying their beliefs is quite interesting sometimes. :D
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***Now, I don't know if you were being genuinely intrigued or utterly sarcastic, but I am very confident in my beliefs as a Christian, thank you.***
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*Eyebrows raised way up* And you felt the need to tell us this... why?
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Obviously to Spam this thread, just like we are.

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Linx watched from the corner of his eye, still rolling on the ground laughing. He wondered what Atila and Nyk would do.
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I'm sorry! I'll post tomorrow if possible!
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*Thanks, Emi for reminding me that ye=you. I kept trying to remember that. Sorry I've been for so long.*

Atila

Atila tried staying with Shahara but the man attacking her forced her back. She parried his blows but his blows made her stagger backwards toward the wagon.
You want to corner me is it? Aye, I ain't easy to corner my friend.
She had a half-smirk on her face. She finally was cornered to the wagon. She jumped back and unto the wagon.

"I must warn ye, me lassie, I have the, " he frustratedly tried slicing at her legs while she spoke, " agility of a cat." And at that she did a flip over him. She twisted in her flip, bringing down a long slit in his spinal-cord.

She leaned forward and said, "Pardons me lass. But I had to do it." She swiped his money sack from his belt before poking him. He fell forward hitting his head on the wagon with a loud crack. He landed on the floor, a pool of blood around his head.
Poor soul... Got his back split open and broke his neck. The worst thing is he got his money stolen. What a dreadful way to die.

Atila stared at the dead body. Shahara voice interrupted her thoughts, "That was good. A little low on offence but good. Where did you learn to flip like that?"
Atila grinned. "Aye, having to jump over fences from being chased by people I wanted to impress them," she squeezed the air between her thumb and her index finger. "Just a little."

Shahara chuckled. Atila handed back her scimitar, "Fine sword. Not being the expert myself."
"Thank you," Shahara nodded.

Atila then noticed Nyk had taken on the supposed leader. The one with the nice sword.

*This isn't a bit bloody right?*
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*Wonderful! If sylverdawn doesn't reply is the next two-three days, I'm going to have to kill Nyk off. I'm going to PM her now.*

Linx

Linx was still laughing. Then he stopped, "Ummm, guys . . ."

Shahara, Karana, Simon, Susa, Atila and Jon turned to look at him. Linx, still on the floor, pointed down the hill, "Isn't that our wagon?"

It was rolling away, at break neck speed. They ran after it, dragging Linx into the fray as well. It looked as though Nyk would have a one on one without any interference.
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"And I wish you didn't have Satan's curly red hair," - Ned Flanders.



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