I had to use the flash on my camera because it's dark in here. It kind of takes away from the color of his skin, but I think it'll be ok. This is my second Flapjack attempt
Hey, I'm Kate. This is great! I don't have much to say, except maybe you should add more detail to his ears? Also, I am just wondering, why did you write 2010 as the date? =p I'm curious. Anyways, no harsh critiques because it's great!
Keep at it!
-Kate
"Sometimes it is said that man cannot be trusted with the government of himself. Can he, then, be trusted with the government of others?"
Hehe! I didn't notice that I accidently wrote 2010 until someone pointed it out, AFTER I drew it. I drew it with ink, so I couldn't go back and change it.
I thought it was a little weird how he (it's a he, right...?) has 2 things on his head. Just pointing that out to you--I got confuzzled for some reason.
Eyes have great detail, although the left one is bigger and darker than the right one.
Love the hands, wings, and shirt-thingy. However, as Kate said, ears look blank and probably need more detail.
Great job overall, though! Also happy that you're in the TT Storybook. You have a lot to catch up on...hehe....
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you." --Fruits Basket Book 1, page 134
Lol, Tohru, that's a scarf around his neck, and the two things on his head is his hair (the yellow one) and his little sailor hat. You should watch The Misadventures of Flapjack sometime! It's great! Oh, the picture I was looking at didn't have detail on his ears.
A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it. — Roald Dahl
However, as Kate said, ears look blank and probably need more detail.
You have a lot to catch up on...hehe....
