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That's a great idea! It would hold out a lot of confusion.
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I agree, I like that idea! But if any guy wants to go with my character just for the heck of it, shes still available.
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My char doesn't want a date so she'll just dance with random guys at the party.
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OK. Now, somebody said, i don't know who, that their were soldiers like attacking the students? Nobody has come yet. The overall scene now, is some confusion in the auditorium and people finding out that they have powers. They really don't have any thoughts of running away because they don't know anybody is chasing them. Soon things will calm down and the school will come up with something fake but logical to explain it (like hallucinations) and everybody will have to go back to thier life.

But, officials will patrol the halls of the school. Supposedly to make sure no students have any dangerous aftereffect, or so they say. Really, they will be watching for any signs of kids with super powers. Any that are found will be taken.

Eventually the kids will probably leave but, for now it is just abnormal kids trying to get dates for the dance, and trying to fit in and survive. Plus, having fun with thier powers as well.

If you have any questions, either post them or PM me. Of course i can change things but that was my idea and i was just making sure everybody understood. once again, nothing is in stone.

Thanks
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Okay so the way it is now, everyone should just go to their homes to get dressed and meet up again at school. By then the school will be cleaned up and everyone would be buying the excuses (except for us of course).
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Alright. We can start after things have calmed and everything's back to normal. That sound good?
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yes, except it is a boadrding school. Everybody sleeps and lives there. And i think you should ask Phelix to the date. Unless your character is really not going. I'm sure if you couldn't touch him, he could at least make you feel like you were.
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Yeah, yeah, that would be good. So right now I'm outside my dorm with Phelix in that meadow illusion thing. Envie is passed out, and the others are in Envie's room. I'll try to get to Envie's room to sort out things.
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great...yawwwwwwwwwwnnnnnnn....good night
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Ok, a lot of people dropped out so.... try and get some other people to join. The story is going to fall apart with only four people or so that have posted. All my other sb have failed in the first few days and i think this one should definitely continue on.

If you have any ideas feel free to post or pm me.
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I'm sorry, I had to drop. I can't get on very much during the day outside of school (home troubles yay) and when I check I'm 4 pages behind. That and I just can't get Lucy integrated into the story like I wanted to.

I wish you the best of luck, though.




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Nah, believe me, there are storybooks in which there are only four people and it works out great.
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Ill try to get people to join though. This SB is one of my favorites.
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Same here but I think it would help if we slowed posts a little. Like I come on after one day and theres an entire page I missed, its hard to follow.
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maybe we can slow down. How about instead of everybody making tons of little posts, just take write a little longer and do it less. This way it's easier to follow and isn't as intimidating. Also, I know it's not needed in a sb, but it would be nice if everybody used some description on the school and where people were so everybody else could get a mental picture and understand what's happening better.
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