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On Becoming Woman

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To lay between two hungry hounds,
And bare no violent traits.
To give no power to the fates,
In their capricious state.
Only then the Siren Sounds
Of dependence and excuse
Will have no further use
And set Neurosis loose.
When you break this virgin ground,
The dawn moves to mid-morning.
Now a skeptic, once adoring,
With ne'er a foreward warning,
A better self is found.
For some the morning passes swift.
Others tend to lag and drift.
And the Girls transormed, a precious gift.
Flawless, perfect, pound for pound.
At the touch of love eveyone becomes a poet




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That was amazing! It had a great flow, and the idea is simple yet unique. On a scale from one to ten, I would rate it nine point nine out of ten. Great work!
If 2012 really is the end of the world, I need my book published now.




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Points 11260
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Hello! :D Call me Freak.

Well...
Only then the Siren Sounds

Is this a name(Siren Sounds), 'cause other wise I don't know why you capitalized it...

Great job! *Claps appraising* Keep on the good work!
Write on.



I was promis'd on a time, To have a reason for my rhyme: From that time unto this season, I receiv'd nor rhyme nor reason.
— Edmund Spenser