A Character

This is Maria from my storybook 'The Court'. The character idea was created by Crocky! (gsppcrocks10) I just drew her. Sorry about the bad quality of the photo, I lack a scanner.

Enjoy!

I like this. She is very pretty :].
It was kind of awkward to adjust to at first, but I do like how her
head is tilting to the side a bit. Makes it more edgy then just standard
standing straight up.

I can't draw so I can hardly judge on drawing skills. Way better then anything I could ever hope to do. Nice job!

This is very good. As Derek said, her angle is awkward at first, but that is nothing to stress about.You are a very talented artist! The only other thing I would say is her left shoulder seems to be to smaller than the right. Maybe even it out? Just a thought Great job!

I can't really say anything but she's really pretty, her scars are barely noticeable though.

Cute! Her character really shows! Great work.
Her right shoulder is either humped up too much or too pointy other than that it's awesome!

Ok, review time.
The hood of the thing is a little stiff. It doesn't fall onto her head if you know what I am saying.

Also on the hood wear it's falling off her shoulder I think you should pull it up then drop it.

Everything else is gorgeous!!!

Keep Drawing

-Flower-

wow i like but i cant see the neck its good that it is tilting but but the neck should be longer i think you should of put lighting and darken it on parts of it to make it more 3-d i would say you should draw below but then again people would be attracted to the head.... anyway ya its not bad

Great drawing--I couldn't even do half as good.

I'm not one to judge drawings since i'm not too good myself, so i'm just going to say this looks very good. You rock at anime ;D

Wow, that's awesome! I'm not much of a person-drawer but that is one of the best I've seen - though I haven't seen much.

Keep up the good work.

Wow... nice once, Kamas. May I ask why the "Maria" was backwards. Anyway, I really liked it. You need to practice more with the cloth (I know it's really hard) but you'll get there. Also with the shadow on the face. I wonder what medium you used here... pens? *shrugs* Anyway, nice job! =)

~ Jash ♥

Hey, nice pic personally I'm one for hard constitutive criticism so i am going to try and squeeze as much out a possible. But in general this is quite the nice picture.

1. What is that thing on her shoulder? Where is her shoulder? You need to watch your proportion the other side of the shoulder need to be wider to match with the otherside. Making the picture cleared ( what is what) would help

2. I like the way her head is positioned it's different and quite nice.

3. Her hair, to be frank is boring and a little frank. One of the trademarks of this genre is amazing hair, you need to put in more detail.

4. This isn't really important but brows should be more than a line. But you got the expression very well anyway so it doesn't really matter.

5. Also clean up your lines. Maybe use a different medium to make it use more professional. Maybe computer manipulation( which i know very little about) or paint. Please tell me what medium you used. I'm a little confussed it looks like texta and pencil but i can't be sure.

Keep up the good work!

Hullo Kamas.

--Maria needs a shadow on her face, indicating the depth of her face within the hood.
--Face is very good. Expressive eyes and mouth looks great.
--Hair needs a nice shine on it. As it currently stands, it's too dark.
--Her jacket/coat/hoodie/poncho thing is very shapeless. Define it better, unless shapeless was the intent.

Let me know if you have any questions. You know where to find me.

--D

Oh wow, this is ancient. Thanks for the comments none the less.