Gladiators

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StolenHearts. is my partner in crime, so feel free to bug her with things you’d otherwise bug me for. Like YWS needs another storybook, but we’ve been thinking of this since September.

Plot:

It’s the year 2598. World War X was fought and finished over twenty years ago, with war prisoners taken off of every side. Here in the Northern Empire (see map attached), we’ve used those prisoners for gladiator fighting. Armed with net guns, SONAR and good ole TASERs, tens of thousands of buffed up men and women fight to the death in huge – as in, thirty acre – holographic arenas. Their fights are followed around by hovering cameras that stay out of the way but still give the audience a good view. The winners gain glory and riches. The losers, well…

The government, or more scientists paid by taxes, have developed an entirely new steroid that enhances a persons ability to Superman like levels and makes them near-invulnerable. Fast runners go sixty miles and hour. The strong can lift a truck on the shoulders. It’d make a great fight, right? There’s a catch. After you get the final dose, you slowly start to lose your mind. You become nothing, a wild animal with no human sense. A destroying, fighting, killing machine. Sure, that was what you’ve been trained to do since you were a kid, but now it’s all you can do. Not sounding so hot anymore, is it?

A few people have immunity to this steroid. They’ve run away from their agents – the people who give them food and housing, in return for a cut of the profits. Also, they’re being chased down by government agents, since the government wants to find out what the heck they have in their systems that is canceling out the steroid.

Authors Note
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Though we don’t know it, there are lots more who have this immunity. What we have to do is band together, stay alive, find a few thousand others and start a war.


Plenty of room for drama, fighting, whatever in this here SB.





Rules:

1.) No god-modding and all that.

2.) People are going to die in this, so no killing off other characters without the author’s permission.

3.) Mild and minimal swearing is allowed, so long as it’s mild and minimal. Nothing harsh, and not all the time.

4.) This is rated R for violence and gore. That’s it. Everything else is PG-13.

5.) Romance is absolutely fine, but NO sex. Period.

6.) No superpowers or magic. Use your death ray.

7.) Post at least twice a week, por favor.

8.) Each post must be at least fifty words long. That means one of us is going to copy-paste it onto Word and have it count your words, so you might want to do the same.

Five strikes, your character(s) will be murdered.



Profile notes:
Your character can be between 16 and 60 years old. 16-28 year olds will be the second generation of gladiators. The original gladiators, the war prisoners, will be the parents of this second generation. Keep this in mind.

Between 15 and 18 characters are allowed, with two characters a person. Try and keep the boy-girl ratio sort of even.

Since we’re in the Northern Empire (North America in 500 years), and we’re war prisoners, you aren’t going to be from the Northern Empire. Remember. You’re from anywhere but.

Photos are optional, but you still have to fill out the written form if you include one. YOu can use a real photo or a drawing, whichever fits your character.

And remember, you'll be really muscular, no exceptions.

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Earth in 2598. This was so fun to do...
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Fighting Name: Even Lendin


Gender:Male


Age:22 (may change)


Birth/Ancestral Home:Italy


Appearance: http://www.eayoyo.com/wp-content/plugin ... 0aspx7.jpg

-Dress: Plain sleeveless shirts, and sweat pants.


Personality:A silent thinker, he doesn;t share his thoughts very often, not wanting to get on your bad side. If you ask of his opinion, it is usually the full truth though. He is careful and never likes to rush into anything quickly. Strangely gentle for his size, but not the kind that will cry over a butterfly.


Likes:To be told the truth, if you lie to him you will find it hard for him to trust you. A plan of action, he likes to be able to know what he does. Time to think, always liking extra time for things.


Dislikes: Opposite of likes.


Habits:He bites his knuckles when he is stressed.


Preferred Weapon(s): He likes to use staffs and short clubs for plain hand weapons. Also fist weapons.


History:Will be added later.


Up for love?:Sure


Other:
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((I might join this...))
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Bolt, I'd really prefer it if you took the time to fill out the written appearance form and stuck the picture under "Pictures". I hate being picky, but I'd appreciate it so very much.


And here's one of my characters (might make another).

Name: Saphira Nicole Keller

Fighting Name: Sapphire

Gender: Female

Age: 22

Birth/Ancestral Home: The northernmost island of the Central Empire

Appearance:
-Hair color, length: Black and straight, reaches to just above her shoulder blades.
-Eye color: Gray.
-Height: 5’ 8”
-Dress: Cargo pants and uniform shirts. Wears a shawl when alone.

Personality: Saphira loves cracking jokes, especially the rude, sarcastic, sometimes insulting ones. There’s always a smile on her face, whether it’s real or not. You can never tell what she’s feeling since she never lets emotions show. It could show weakness to an enemy. She loves fighting, and often just picks on people until they’ll argue with her.

Likes: A strong opponent, money, butterscotch, friends.

Dislikes: A fight that’s too easy, cowards, poisons.

Habits: Rubs her hands when she’s thinking.

Preferred Weapon(s): Net gun, dagger, and silver cord.

History: A born and raised Gladiator, her parents were both from her ancestral home (see above). She was raised to kill and had her first fight when she was ten, quickly becoming one of the stronger fighters in her country. At twenty she was given the steroid, and that was when her immunity was discovered and everything fell apart. After that she ran, and since she’s been fighting in underground (unofficial and hence illegal) matches for cash.

Up for love?: Yeppers.

Other:

Picture(s):
Saphira

Favorite Shirt
Favorite Pants
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Hey everybody! It's me stolen (: And here's my character, I'm probably gonna take a while so just hold on. Haha.





Name: Ariana L. Swanson

Fighting Name: Adonia "Don"

Gender: Female

Age: 20

Birth/Ancestral Home: The uppermost part of the eastern empire

Appearance:

-Hair color, length: Dirty blonde and to the shoulders

-Eye color: Green, but its a a rare eye color sort of green.

-Height: 5"0' She's short.

-Dress: Baggy crapis with multiple pockets and zippers everywhere with a short tank top. Often she wears goggles on her head like the famous Amelia Earhart. looks like These You never see her without them.

Personality: Very happy sort of evil type. She likes to mess with minds and antagonize. She's very fake, most of the time she smiles for no reason. So, you'll never know if she's telling the truth or lying and if her smiles just an act or not. But deep inside she's always wanted to find that one special guy.

Likes: messing with people, sarcasm, boys, the clouds and wind, dude friends, any bottle of whiskey, a good fight.

Dislikes: Mean girls, good weather, annoying people.

Habits: Chews her fingernails, giggles alot, stares.

Preferred Weapon(s): short sword, axe, spears.

History: Don hasn't always liked to fight, when she was small she was the cutest and ditziest around. She was the one that everyone picked on, singing songs about how pathetic she was. One day she learned that she hated it and started picking fights, her first fight was when she was 12 years old. She was given the steroid at 19, she found out that her body was immune. After that she ran and is now living with a group of outcasts underground. She fights for any money she can get her hands on.

Up for love?: of course.

Other: Not shy at all.

Picture(s):Ariana

kinda like the cargo pants.

Yayy I finished! Alright here's my character! Hope you like her, tell me if you have interest in being friends or love. (:
I'm so excited for this storybook!




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((Might post... female character))
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha




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No time for MY storybook ?
Right, right..
Haha, just kidding.
& this sounds really good. I might just join.

But I miss ROD it was so much fun ):




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Name: Maria Fixpatrick

Fighting Name: Eris

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Birth/Ancestral Home: The western empires "Old Newyork"

Appearance:

-Hair color, length: DArk brown, falls past her shoulders

-Eye color: An icy blue

-Height: 5'5

-Dress: Jean shorts and a white longsleeve shirt

Personality: A bit bipolar, one minute she is all over you with a smile and then the next she is distant and a bit moody. She doesn't realy notice a change.

Likes: People and food.

Dislikes: Mean people and this whole gadiator thing.

Habits: She doesn't really have any since she is so bipolar and she is very hard to predict. The ony one she truly has is her inability to not tak to strangers.

Preferred Weapon(s): She likes things that go boom and tick. she likes these because then she doen't have to see the person's pained face.

History: Before she was taken as a POW she lived in "Old New york," a crumbling city with a history. She was an orphan who needed money (we will hit that up later)

Up for love?: Yep

Other:

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*catch me if you can ~!*




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Nice profile you guys, but Aimee, since we're in the Western Empire, they wouldn't take their own citizens to be Gladiators. Everyone is from some other empire, or at least their parents are.


We need guys!
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Name: Phelix Stark

Fighting Name: Quicksilver

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Birth/ancestral home: Southern Isles

Appearance: Long black hair that covers most of his face. Yellowish hazel eyes. 5 feet 11 inches.

Personality. He is quiet and assertive. He is always listening and ready to fight. He is an amazing fighter and is much stronger than he looks.

Likes: Fishing and hunting

Dislikes: Death and the steroid

Habits: He has the habit of never trusting anybody.

Preferred weapon: Spear, Harpoon, javelin, and short sword.

History: Lived in the southern isles with his family. His father was a fisherman and they made their living off that.

Up for love: Heck yeah

Other: none

Picture: none
"Ever knee shall bow and tongue confess...."
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Name: Desmond Montreal Du Fleu

Fighting Name: Demetrius "Demi"

Gender: Male

Age: 25

Birth/Ancestral Home: The southern part of the Eastern Empire.

Appearance:

-Hair color, length: dirty blond and cut very short.

-Eye color: A dim sea green that changes to and icy blue.

-Height: 5"11'

-Dress: Prefers his shirt off but normally wears a wife beater with so baggy jeans and combat boots. Always has a sash stashed with weaponry.

Personality: He is quite dashing but can lose his temper easily. He's always been protective of other people but never for himself. It doesn't matter if he's lost an arm if you sprained an ankle he will do everything to help you not him. When he falls in love he falls hard. His heart's been broken multiple times but he's a positive thinker so he knows he'll find somebody. He's a smooth talker and a romantic.

Likes: a good fight, respectful girls, the moon, the truth, a girl in his arms.

Dislikes: people who mock him, outraging, seeing little kids get harmed, bad people.

Habits: hands go in pockets when nervous, He runs his fingers through his hair a lot.

Preferred Weapon(s): Anything that has bullets or timers. He loves the boom and bang theory.

History: When he was six he picked an iris for his mother who was sick in bed at the time when he went to give it to her. Everyone was surrounding the bed with their heads hung low. He pushed through and found his mother was ice cold. He put the flower into her hand and closed it. He ran out of the room and cried in a closet. After 10 years he left home. He was injected with the steroid at age 17, when he found his immunity he ran. He's now living underground doing everything he can to get money.

Up for love?: duhh!

Other:

Picture(s): Desmond


WOOH! I gotta man now (: Hahahaahah You know you like him c(:




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Come on people this will be a great and entertaining storybook! I have so many ideas i want to work with. We need people, hmm where to find people...>_>




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Six characters. We can work with this. I'll make another guy later, but right now, let's start this. Maybe more people will join once they see it's successful ;) .



Saphira

Her eyes were fixed on the screen in front of her. A few blood droplets had splattered onto the camera’s lens, covering parts of the fight from her eyes. Over a half hour had passed; long for a secret match.

She continued to stare, watching for weaknesses, memorizing the fighting styles, anything that could help her beat the winner. Time passed like gas, annoyingly but fairly fast. Finally the match was ended with the winner, a well-built young man probably no older than she, bashing the head of his opponent in with a metal club, killing him.

“Winner: Lendin, Even. Outcome: Death. Next match: Sapphire, versus Lendin, Even.”

The speaker rang loud and true in her ears, one of the most familiar things there was, and Saphira hurried to the arena to prepare herself. There was a ten-minute rest break for her opponent, but she could use that time for placing the appropriate weapons in hands reach and adjusting to the current habitat.

A deserted landscape had been created, covered in cracked earth and boulders the size of a small house. There was no sign of life anywhere. Death, maybe, as every ten yards there was a corpse of some sort to scare the faint-hearted, but no life.

She started to plan out what she would do, how she would attack and defend. Clubs and bats, brute force but heavy and slow. She could easily dodge them, but it would take too long to recover and he would beat her to death. Defense concerned staying at a distance and netting him, or shooting him with a gun. Either way, it would end the fight too soon. She’d take a few minutes to assess his strength, then taunt him a while before finishing him…

As her opponent entered the arena she pulled her black hair into a ponytail and looked him in the eye. He was contemplating her; planning his strategy, just as she had done moments ago. The countdown ticked away as they waited for the starting bell to ring.

Ding.



**Bolt, let’s make this match a stalemate or a draw, so no one dies. I won’t sever your limbs if you don’t murder me, ‘kay? ;) **
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Adonia

One by one i dropped the coins into my palm, back and forth making an almost perfect tune. Their jingling made me happy, I raised one eyebrow at my opponent with a smirk. The younger boy folded his arms and tried not to show a crack of disappointment.

"Better luck next time Kiddo. You should get that leg checked out." I scoffed. I had always been the boasting one, a trait I had inherited from genes.

"I'll get you next time Adonia, you should count on that." He said with a load of confidence. He turned on his heels and walked away.

"That's what they all say Kiddo, right before they go down." I said laughing. Kids these days, whatever happened to good manners; the little snots. I shoved my hand into my pocket letting the jingling coins finally find their way home. The crowd from the fight had left soon after, as they always did.

People knew it was wrong to fight like we were doing, so they were guilty. But, I on the other hand couldn't care less. I mean of course I'm worried we could be sought after but, until that day comes I'm going to be fighting for my life.

I began walking through the tunnels, returning to my group. I did the secret knock. A little piece of the door slid a crack, and an eye appeared.

"Password?" A crackly voice said.

"Are you kidding me Alena, you old bat let me in!" I said with a smirk. I rested my hands on my hips while she unlatched the many locks on the door. It creaked open and I stepped inside, looking at Alena with wide eyes.

Alena was the oldest in our group, she was around sixty years old. But, her heart was that of an energetic five year old. She had white blond hair that was wavy, it was normally a mess. Alena always wore earrings, and very intriguing ones at that. Big loops and twists of silver or gold with a dash of color and brilliant sheen.

"Good day to you too Don, how was the fight?" She said her sweet voice caked with sarcasm. Her smile was missing some teeth due to fights and such.

"It was amazing! The boy took every opening i gave him, but in the end he missed one and I got him good on his upper thigh. It was a bad gash. Poor lad." I said enthusiastically.

She nodded her head as she sat back down, "My oh my, kids these days are getting so much stronger."

"Indeed." I muttered waving her off as i went to my room.

**Just getting into the story, haha.**
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Phelix Stark

My gaze shifted over my opponent. He held himself like a champion, tall and firm. His eyes never averted from mine and they were stone cold. The sleek silver saber he held reflected the sun's bright rays into my eyes. My grip tightened around the spear i held. The grooves in it had become embedded into my memory, my weapon was a part of me now.

The roar of the crowd blazed in my ears. As he approached and crouched into a stance, it faded to the abyss in the back of my mind. Nothing existed except me and him. Silence, as small puffs of dust rose when he walked. I crouched absent mindedly,and tested the tip of my spear on my hand. A small red bead of blood trickled down and stained the sand.

"Ahhhhh!" He roared and the saber came speeding down in an unstoppable arch towards my head. Time to dance.
"Ever knee shall bow and tongue confess...."
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