Young Writers Society

->You may be wondering why the words are capitalized when they are not. Every line is a song title on my iPod. If you dont believe me, i can post the artists names.<-

It Ends Tonight

I’m Yours, but that Don’t Matter;

It Ends Tonight.

When You’re Around, I’m Miserable At Best.

it’s Nobody’s Fault,

you don’t Belong With Me.

the Conversation we had,

You said “Don’t trust me.”

“I don’t care…” I said back… So What?

I’m Your Lady and That’s The Way It Is.

Everything We Had is Damaged…

I Fell In Love Without You.

I Hurt Because Of You;

and… even though It Ends Tonight,

My Heart Will Go On.

Hiya Skip! Kamas here.

Points for originality that's for sure. It is quite nicely done at that.

But! I do not know it that breaches codes of Plagiarism. The problem is that you are using many people's work/lyrics but putting them together to make your own work.

dictionary definition of plagiarism: (noun) The process of taking some else's work and passing it off as one's own.

I am thinking this is sort of borderline. I would suggest you contact a mod to judge that. I am a little bit iffy on this myself. You do not want to get into trouble for Plagiarism.

Good Luck, with love,

Kamas

Hey there, I don't really know if I'd count this as a poem, but it's definitely cute. I don't consider it Plagiarism since you said they're all songs from artists and aren't your own. I really think it's cute how you used song titles to make a little cute saying/ story/poem thing. I also love almost all of those songs, so I was pumped when I read them. I'd have to say the best one there is Miserable at Best

Katie

10 points for uniqueness! Way to go haha

This is most definantly not plagiarism. I did not go and pick lyrics from songs and make them a poem. That is plagiarism.

Hello. IR Ir here to review your poem. I really liked the Ipod idea. I don't know if its plagiarism or not but i doubt it.

When You’re Around, I’m Miserable At Best.

I really like this line, even though its sad, it made we laugh.

Its hard to tell you to change anything because all the lines are song names. You should make more poems like this though, if its not illegal. I like the idea. Keep Writing!!!

I love this idea! The poem was okay, but the idea is brilliant. There is one line in particular that I liked...
"I Fell In Love Without You." I do not believe this is plagiarism. You could have put this up and not told anyone about the names, and it wouldn't matter!
~Classy

OK, so this is a good base for a greater poem. The tone and emotion is good, but you're missing something... Organization. Right now, its a big mush that sounds awkward. Putting it into verses would make it flow a bit better. I liked in the begining how you repeated "It Ends Tonight", but then it just stopped; mabye you could repeat that after each verse. Once you organize this better, it will be great. Keep it up =]

nice i do get your poem i think it is nice

I got intrigued to read this poem initially because of the title. I was prepared to comment that you change it because it's the title of a mainstream song. But after reading the description, I guess it fits.

I have to say, this was original. I wrote a poem from the titles of my poetry before, but it didn't make much sense. Yours on the other hand, did. Tragic and sweet at the same time. I like it! :]

WOW! Good idea you had there of writing a poem based on song titles! I was going to do that once but it came out really bad so I didn't post it up on this. Good job though. I was a little confused, didn't really get the poem but strrangely enough I still enjoyed it LoL. Yeah...I am quite weird!

I am sorry to always be the one who has to be sceptical but i am afraid i just dont get it. To me this just seems like a jumble of sentences with a very loose link. wheres the technique? wheres the substance?.
i am kind of begining to think they should change the name of this site to "have a go writers society"