The Angel Of Adrenaline Rap

(Heavy drum intro)

I'm the angel of adrenaline (Scream) (Heavy guitar beat kicks in)

I'm the master of the mission
The last edition of elite
Soldiers of submission
Bow down at my feet
Fleet of unstoppable
Machines made for destruction
Built for battle and war
Set your self in the saddle for an eruption of blood and gore
Leave u begging for breath
Wishing for death
Come back and take the last of your life that’s left
God has no power over me
Cant u see its well know that
I aint got no soul
to sell
fuck heaven
im a rebel
against the devil
and take over hell
Rule with a mad grin
Pure Evil runs in my skin
Im the angel of adrenaline (Scream)


Im a fighter born for war
No remorse
Push my body higher than it could ever go before
The black horse
Soul of fire, heart rotten to the core
I take my stakes by force
And of course
I wont stop till the top is my source
The end is where I begin
And when the chances look thin
I swoop in
Im the angel of adrenaline (Scream)


(Guitar solo)


The heart of our Unstoppable forces
Bad blood courses through my veins
I hold the bane of man in both hands
Proud In which I stand and defend my land
Im honoured by name
An indestructible heart and a mind that’s insane
A passionate soul and warfare imbedded brain
got no shame
don’t wait to claim
I run in and take it now
Been taught how
To break your spirit down
I race fast against time
Pace myself past the finish line
What u ask for I will refine
Unstoppable tasks is where I shine
Take off your masks
and gasp for the last time
cos your ass is mine
Im the angel of adrenaline (Scream)

Wow. I really liked that. I'm all into screamo and heavy metal so it really appealed to me. If I could have changed anything, I think since we're all writers on here, you could have spelled "u" the proper way. (You) anyway, it was still really great. I wished I could have heard the actual music, but I had to make my own in my mind, but it was really good! Yay!

The rhyming was good but the beat was out of control!
First you would have a very long line then all of a sudden you have a line that is made out of two words! I it really hard to read rap espicially that doesnt have a rythem.
Work on this. I am really sorry if I am being to hard on you.

The rhyming was good but the beat was out of control!
First you would have a very long line then all of a sudden you have a line that is made out of two words! I it really hard to read rap espicially that doesnt have a rythem.
Work on this. I am really sorry if I am being to hard on you.

The rhyming was good but the beat was out of control!
First you would have a very long line then all of a sudden you have a line that is made out of two words! I it really hard to read rap espicially that doesnt have a rythem.
Work on this. I am really sorry if I am being to hard on you.

The rhyming was good but the beat was out of control!
First you would have a very long line then all of a sudden you have a line that is made out of two words! I it really hard to read rap espicially that doesnt have a rythem.
Work on this. I am really sorry if I am being to hard on you.

The rhyming was good but the beat was out of control!
First you would have a very long line then all of a sudden you have a line that is made out of two words! I it really hard to read rap espicially that doesnt have a rythem.
Work on this. I am really sorry if I am being to hard on you.

Yeh sorry if the spelling is a little off or anything guys.
I started writing this on msn to a friend and I guess I must have forgot to check my spelling afterward.

i thought this was great and, i dunno whether you meant this, but i could really easily hear this sung to a rage against the machine-like tune. and i actually liked the different lengths of lines; i thought it made the shorter ones seem more punchy and stuff