Sinner's Search Preface

Did you ever wonder what would happen if Adam and Eve never committed original sin? Here's where we find out.

Preface:
God created man in his image; in the divine image he created them; male and female. God blessed them saying: “Be fertile and multiply. Fill the earth and subdue it.” Then the Lord God planted a garden in Eden in the east. Where he placed the man he had formed. Out of the ground the Lord God made various trees grow that were delightful to look at and good for food. With the tree of life in the middle of the garden. The Lord God then took the man and placed him in the Garden of Eden to cultivate and care for it. The Lord God gave man this order. “You are free to eat from any of the trees in this Garden except the tree of Knowledge.”

But the tree of Knowledge never grew. God created Adam and Eve. But they were never tempted to eat the forbidden fruit because it did not grow. So original sin was never committed. The world lives on in ultimate peace for now.

Did you ever wonder what would happen if Adam and Eve never committed original sin? Here's where we find out.

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Have you ever, instead of did you ever

But the tree of Knowledge never grew. God created Adam and Eve. But they were never tempted to eat the forbidden fruit because it did not grow. So original sin was never committed. The world lives on in ultimate peace for now

Ok the idea is interesting, but if Adam and Eve never sinned then I don't see where there would be conflict. A story needs conflict to grow. I'm intrigued as to what you have planned. I'd like to read an actual peace of it to see how you intrude conflict within a place of peace and happiness.

I'm not sure what to make of this. There isn't much I can review, because the majority of this piece is from the bible itself. I thought it was a bit simple, to be honest; no fancy words, the ending straight up without too many images the reader can focus on. However, I did like the idea, and I thought it was very creative. Not everyone can think of a topic like this, so I'd say good job on the topic. Maybe if you'd work on it some more, and give us [the readers] something to feel or see while reading it. Nice job =)
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