Why Thursdays Shouldn't Exist (An Elegy, no not a Eulogy)

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A new disease
Not in the books.
An unmarked grave
Lost in a field of names.
Caught without an imprint.
In an abyss of forgotteness.
Sealed, closed inside
A rotten coffin.
In the end, the lush green
Grass grows over dirt
And makes it look
As if no one
Is locked
“Six feet under.”




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HA HA I found you (lol) Didnt I already read this one.
Jaylynn
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Certainly well written..I like it. Don't really have much to comment on sorry, except that it's good. Ah well. Nice work..
"Sometimes we see a cloud that's dragonish,
A vapour sometimes like a bear or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain, or blue promontory,
With trees upon't that nod unto the world,And mock our eyes with air.."



"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind