Entry for ThornedRose's contest~

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This is for ThornedRose's worst piece of literature contest. Prepare for it!

Kelly lived in a small house down a lane nearby a school called Daisys. She had two best friends called Susie and Morgan and they had known eachother forever since they were kids, but now they weren't kids and they were all 12. One day Kelly went to school at 7:15 sharp because she wanted to get their early to meet her friends Susie and Morgan to talk to them. Only when she got ther she didn't see Morgan and Susie but some strange boy she didn't know she she went up to him to get to know him. "Hi" Kelly said to him. "Hi" He said back to her. The boy was bleeding down his leg, which made Kelly laugh because she thought he had actually just spilt tomato sauce down him but when she asked him he said no and that he'd actually fallen over but it didn't hurt he was just trying to be cool and pretend it didn't. Kelly could tell it did then Morgan and Susie came and she went over screaming because she was so excited and said hi.

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Absolutely horrible ;) You'll deffinitely win!
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More than amazing
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Quite frankly, I think It could have been worse yew kewd haf meespyled awll ga wurds lyke des.
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Haha! That's awesome! Great job! But empress is partly right. It definitely could have been worse! (Though I actually don't know how... Maybe take her advice! :smt005) Anyways, I hope you win! See you around!

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