There's this girl i know she is very like no other i see her all the time we have the same interest. She is very smart and very different there is like nothing she is a surprise she is a dog she is a cat she is a lion and she is a warrior she has never been place but she has been waiting. There will be a day at the light when she has to get judged and what she would dois stand there and read the book she made she is living the life even though her life aint that great. Being a young author and an alsome one at that she is so much different from other kids she doesnt like to impress people but she like to be the person everyone says wow about oo yea i forgot to tell who the girl was the girl is me : )
I don't mean to be "that guy" but typically here at YWS we want members to have about 2 reviews for every piece of writing they post. Additionally, you should have reviewed at least 3 pieces of others' writing before posting any of your own work.
So sorry, I know rules can be a pain sometimes, but keep on writing and commenting on other pieces! Reviews for yours will follow. :]
--- James
In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, That on the ashes of his youth doth lie, As the deathbed whereon it must expire, Consumed by that which it was nourished by. (Exerpt from Shakespearean Sonnet Number 73)
Welcome to YWS, why not come down to the welcome forum and introduce yourself.
On YWS we always try to check out grammar and edit our work the best we can before we put it on the site. What I would recommend is editing this to the best of your ability first, then I will give you a review.
This almost sounds like an introduction, if it is the best place for it is the welcome forum. There you can get to know other writers and discuss your interests.
Hope to see you there,
Izzy
Everything has been figured out, except how to live.
A person is more than their experiences, stacked up like stones... Our best moments are the foundations we use to reach for the sky. — Yumi and the Nightmare Painter by Brandon Sanderson
