Life & love...and...The heart

Life & love

Life is for living
Love is for giving
and evil is hidden everywhere


The Heart

I see light,
and i see dark,
that fill the spaces in my heart,
that send away my tears and frets,
and seems to rid my of regrets.


i got bored and wrote these, so they may not be very amazing, but i thought id share it with you anyway

Life And Love

The first two lines are nice, but the third line doesn't seem to fit that well though. I feel like it's just kinda thrown in there, I bet if you just went back and thought it'd be better, but then again, this was just a quick thing, so no real worries.


The Heart

I really don't like these kind of rhyming poems, but I do like this one, it's simple and gets the point across and it sends a nice message.

I would fix the lowercase 'I' in the second line and it'd be a nice little poem thing.

These are nice and okay, but from what I've seen i bet you could improve these.