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Just wanted to say hello. It's great I found this site because I'm aspiring to be a author when I get older. I am currently thirteen and live in Connecticut. I hope this site could really improve my writing. Well I don't really know what else to say. I hope I have a good time here. :)




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Hi, I'm caitlin, and welcome to YWS! Connecticut? Wow, that's across the country from where I'm at! (Hicktown, Oregon)

A few quick rules:

1. 2:1 ratio- before you post a piece of your own, review two pieces from other people.
2. DONT LEAVE YOUR KEYBOARD ON CAPS. IT FEELS LIKE IM SHOUTING.
3. Dnt tlk lyk dis ethr. Chtspk iz so annyng.
4. If your piece contains foul language, rate it PG-13. If it contains mature situations, rate it R.
5. Be nice and helpful when reviewing.

Oh, and,
1. This site will definitely improve your writing and
2. You'll have tons of fun here! :D

So what do you like to write about? What do you like to read? What is your favorite band, food, color, ecetera?

PM me if you need anything!

*caitlin
Two camels in a tiny car!




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hello Kyle Sync i am SimonCowellLuver also known around here as SCL or just Simon.

A few simple rules around here are...

:arrow: 1 2:1 ratio is when you write something you must post 2 reviews. very simple
:arrow: 2 NO CAPS ITS ANNOYING
:arrow: 3No chat speak like lol or l8r
:arrow: 4 rate your work
:arrow: 5 Be respectful that is simple i don't need to explain that. :mrgreen:

Most importantly Be creative and have fun! :smt026

I will be around if you need me pm me anytime ok.

See you around

SimonCowellLuver (SCL) :smt038
3 facts: 1.You can't lick your elbow
2. you just tried it
3. I caught you cause i saw you




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Simon, quick tip. You might want to read the greet above you so you don't give the same info they gave,
That User Who Changed Their Name A Dozen Times And So No One Ever Knew Who They Were Half the Time and When They Did Only Used Bolt.

The tragic tale of losing all #Brand for nothing in return.

The Take Away Is You Probably Know Me As Bolt




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Hey Kyle!
Just to add on to what the others have said:
It's fine to use things like "lol" once in a while, but keep it to an absolute minimal.
After all, to improve one's writing, we should practise using proper english, right? :)
And of course, punctuate, spell, capitalise and grammatise your words properly whenever possible :D
Especially in your works, you should edit obvious errors and your critics will help you out with the rest :D

Feel free to PM me if you've got any other questions :)
Have a good day!
~Meep(:
~Liverpool F.C Supporter~
"You'll never walk alone"



I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom