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Onomatopoeia

J. Haux · 2005-10-01T20:24:12Z

This was co-written by three tired teenagers after a sleepover (myself, and two friends: Jessica Heartman, Janel Horcrux). Jessica pushed me to submit it, so... Onomatopoeia Strangled by a sunbeam Early in the morning While sittin’ by a gurgling stream This poem’s really boring. Captured by a moonbeam Later that day Saw a little squirrely Running away. Attacked by a balance beam Right before lunch Tried to run away, but— Crunch! Blinded by a laser beam That night at ten o’ clock Saw dancing capybaras, I must have been in shock. Crushed beneath a ceiling beam In a hotel by the bay. The hostess stopped to ask me How I enjoyed my stay. I was strangled by a sunbeam Early in the morning. Now people are practicing The homophone of morning.

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Mon Jan 09, 2006 10:23 pm

Crysi says... · Mon Jan 09, 2006 10:23 pm

Teehee. That was very amusing. I kept looking for the onomatopoeia, and I wondered why you called it that if there was only one.

Very cute though. Sounds like something Mesh and I would come up with in the wee hours of the morning on soda and chocolate...

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Thu Jan 12, 2006 11:15 pm

millie says... · Thu Jan 12, 2006 11:15 pm

ha ha that was a cool poem but kind of funny
I liked it!!!!

**Out of the blue....and into the GREEN**

I Know....I'm Shadow's Sister.....Weird or what?

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Fri Jan 20, 2006 12:44 am

Snip Snip says... · Fri Jan 20, 2006 12:44 am

This is a good poem, but also one of the WEIRDEST ever. I like the strangled by sunbeams line, and the moonbeam line too

so give me all your poison,
and give me all your pills,
if this is what you want then
FIRE AT WILL

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Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:07 pm

Fireweed says... · Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:07 pm

Cool. Though it's random and non-sensical, it's quite clever... Interesting what a sleep-deprived mind (or rather 3 sleep deprived minds in this case) can come up with. Dancing capybaras and lazer beams... awesome.

This went on a bit and began to lose it's spark by the end, but it made me smile. Congrats to you and your buddies. :mrgreen: