Deleted. Feel free to PM me if you're a former reader wondering why/where it is now. If the mods would rather delete this entirely, feel free. The reviews are sort of nice to look back on now and then as pick me ups though.
Last edited by Pattycakes on Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:14 am, edited 2 times in total.
Dude, this is a great story. Every time I finsh reading a chapter, I find myself laughing at how brilliantly-well Andrew is written. The development here is improving with each chapter, and I hate to say it, I'm having a hard time finding fault with anything, critique-wise.
I'd only suggest one thing, and it's not that big of a deal, as it is. It wouldn't hurt to refresh the reader's mind when it comes to vocabulary and terms for debate, because I haven't read any of the previous chapters in a long while, and I had some difficulty following exactly what was going on during the debate. Otherwise, once again, I'm a very, very satisfied man.
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