They both made me chuckle. Pretty nice limericks. I've written a few and they're a bit better than mine. My favorite was probably the second one, but they both are nice.
These were great. Yeah, they were dead funny... I like the second one the best, great job. You should definately post some of your fantasy stories, I'm sure they're brilliant, and if not... Who cares? You'll probably get some reviews to make them better, mine aren't that good but I still posted them...
"Look inside the eye of your mind,
Don't you knowyou might find,
A better place to play."-Oasis. For dreamers.
Hehe, they made me chuckle. Actualy I didn't chuckle, I just smiled and felt happy but you get the picture. Very nice and cute, short poems are always fun. It's nice not to read poetry that's not depressing for once. Of course that's they only poetry I tend to write so I really shouldn't be talking... But anyways very cute. I like them a lot.
Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality. - Jules de Gaultier
very good! i, for one, could never write a limerck. rhyming and syllables are tolerable in my book, but never favored. just like a limerck is supposed to be, these were witty or ridiculous, and certainly made me smiley on a cloudy New Jersey day.
