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Griffin-

He landed softly and cut the parachute, rolling on the green hill. Standing, he glanced up into the clear blue sky. Griffin cocked his head listening, in the distance was the roar of the plane engine, and below that closer. A single long scream, the cry cut off abrutly and there was a thud.

He glanced over at the other end of the clearing, Jason Thomas lay dead on the ground. When his body was found, the police would confirm his parachute never deployed. Turning he rolled his parachute up and stuffed it in the car. Tugging off the red haired wig, and pulling out the contacts.

Pulling the leather jacket on, he started the car, and drove down the forest trail. The ground was damp but that didn't matter, even if the cops got a tread the car was untraceable. Just like everthing else he owned, just like him. There was a good reason his family were called ghosts.

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The cell phone rang as Griffin left the lecture hall. Glancing around he made sure no one was close before answering. "What now?"

"You idiot, I told you to make it look like an accident! So why are the police running a murder investigation?" The voice was angry, the client was even using something to disuise his voice. Not that it mattered, Griffin always knew who he worked for, so they couldn't double cross him.

He rolled his eyes, sarcasm thick in his low voice as strode down the hall. "What did you think would happen? Jason was the fourth Thomas to end up 'accidentally' dead. The cops might dismiss one accident, or maybe two. But four, and all of them blood related? That screams foul play, if not outright murder."

Raking his hand through short dark hair he glared at he cell phone. "Look if you're too chicken to go on, just pay me for the targets I've already taken out." He paused then added as an afterthought. "Oh and advise against going to the police, you wouldn't make it to the station and it would not be pretty."

There was a squeak on the other end, then the client spoke. "I've already gone to far. Finish the job, if you can." There was a click and then the dial tone.

Sighing, Griffin hung up and pocketed the phone. Ducking his head to avoid the rain he ran out into the Chicago morning.
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*Okay, I'll join then*


Name: Zire

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Nationality: English

Years of experience: 13

People you've killed: Lost count after the first five hundred.

Addictions: Blood (Collects bottles of blood of whomever he can) *Yes that's an extremely strange addiction, i know.* Leaving cryptographic hints on his victims.

Your "normal" job: Works as a part time Psychologist in the local asylum.

Method of choice: Long range. But he prefers close range whenever he feels that his blood 'collection' needs more bottles. His weapons vary from his bare hands to a sniper rifle. Anything and everything that does the job is good for him.

Appearance: 6'2, has black hair and green eyes that tend to grow cold when he is on a job. He is thin and not very muscular but has learned karate and Aikido. He is a little tanned and usually wears black or white clothes.

Who do you live with? No one, sometimes prefers living in the asylum for a few nights.

Thinking of quitting? No.

What country do you live in? America, but visits England whenever he gets a chance to visit some of his 'favorite' mental patients in England.

How much do you charge? His price depends on the client and the victim.

Anything else you want to add: He is what most people call a 'sadistic psychopath', the exact reason he started learning Psychology when he went to college. He is currently a person with two personalities. A kind and normal personality and the inner sadistic psychopath. He collects blood of his victims when his clients do not ask for an 'accident'. He is extremely careful and has contacts and friends in high places as he was raised by a mob boss (leader of a highly spread-out group of crime syndicates). He likes killing people but does not particularly like to kill people who do not 'deserve' to die. In which cases he charges a high amount of money and tries his best to make his victim disappear using his knowledge on the human mind (Kinda like mental re-establishment or 'brain-washing').

When he kills the victim with a knife or any other close range objects he usually leaves cryptographic messages for the police, daring them to catch him and leading them away from his clients. This being one of the reasons he is extremely famous for his killing in the underworld.

*okay?*

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ok this is gonna die super fast if we dont meet up some how
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You're right,but my character is in the middle of Hong Kong right now and I highly doubt I can skip to America. I had a plot going....Maybe we could all meet at like the airport? Like have you guys ever seen action movies where the main character runs through a crowded air port, bumping into people? We could spin off of that, you know? Think about it, we all have to go to the airport to carry out one of our assignments in a different country....? Huh?....

I don't know, I'm just throwing ideas out and I see several problems with this one....but yeah...
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I'd be glad to just get something going, screw the unlikeliness.
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Same, but does anybody else have an idea or two? I seriously just want to post soon...:)
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*Yay I'm the first to get an idea... or two, That's strange, the YWS users I once knew tookonly a few hours to come up with great ideas, whats wrong with you guys? o.O*

Idea 1

All of us, the assassins, get one strange offer from a unknown client who refuses to reveal himself but will offer a great deal of money. To fulfill this offer we must go to [Insert place here]. From there on the plot thickens?

Idea 2

We are each ordered to kill another assassin who happens to be none other than one of the other characters in the storybook. So for example Zire would be chasing Griffin who would in turn be chasing Roland who in turn is chasing....


Any good ones?
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those sound great!

Ill be workin on something over the night, but i cant promise genius
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Firestalker, your second idea is best. (Y) It sounds cools. ^_^
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Okay so lets take a vote. Who chooses which?

I'm okay with both, SheepMonoxide agrees with no. 2.
How about the others?

By the way if anyone has any better ideas feel free to post them, we don't have to use my ideas just because i posted them first.

Lets get this started soon people!
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I vote for option 2! Except I can kind of see it getting a bit chaotic. :)
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My vote goes for option 2 as well. (:
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Well should we start then, or does anyone object for the 2nd one?
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nope, no objections
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That's five votes for no 2, so who's going to start if there are no objections?
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