Random Randomness!!!!!!!

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One moment in time...
(This line is just for a rhyme)
You were right there with me:
Now I cannot see.
You were so ugly
You looked like a pugly.
I thought I would barf
When you said "Arf!".
What are you, a dog?
Make me sleep like a log!
Can't think of a line...
But this poem's all mine!
(Except for my co-author Hannah,
Who is eating a yellow banana.)
I drew a smiley,
But I really hate Miley.
Her boyfriend is hot;
Her dad is not.
Michael Phelps smoked pot;
Nonetheless he is hot.
But JFK got shot...
And that's all I got.

WORD!!!!!!!!!

Disclaimer: You need not tell me in your reviews that this poem is stupid, retarded, and completely meaningless. I am well aware of the fact. Me and my friend Hannah wrote this while sitting on my trampoline. I would come up with a line, and then she would make a rhyme for it. Hey, a little randomness never hurt anyone! :)
Last edited by Warrior Princess on Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
You must be swift as the coursing river,
With all the force of a great typhoon,
With all the strength of a raging fire,
Mysterious as the dark side of the moon.




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Oh gosh, this is so funny and random! And utterly stupid. XD

You could have erevised it so that it had a little more structure or an iambic pattern, but that's all I've got. I can't really review this, because it's obviously supposed to not make sense at all.

Love the "WORD!!!!!!" at the end. XD




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HAHA I love it! I don't think it could get any better!
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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I adore the simple randomness of this whole shebang.

Besides, who doesn't like things that are randomly random. And I for one will not rag on you for being random.

But I definitely got a kick out of the Phelps line just because I have a teacher who looks just like him and always gets made fun of for doing the puff puff pass behind the school with the second graders. (He's never actually done that, we just make fun of him alot.)

And now I miss school.

Drat...never thought I'd here myself say that.

Anyway, awesome random poem. Props for silly words.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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:lol: i love it!
I'm a JESUS FREAK!!!

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