Living 2 Die

Hi I've seen some of your work and I like it! Except for one thing. Your style seems to be to use slang internet terms like saying "u" instead of "you" and "2" instead of "to". This is just a pet peeve of mine. I think it looks sloppy and uneducated. But your work I actually like a lot in spite of that! If that's your style then keep it up, but that's unfortunately what I think of Internet slang.

Just some questions

"Stressin no more I am on things without real value" Huh?

"Especially bling the fancy thingz" and again, Huh??

Sorry it just may be because I'm no poet, but I don't understand what you meant to say there.
Oh, and this:

"a pretty girlfriend, gettin educated" This doesn't really fit into the tempo or rhyme pattern of the poem.

Keep up the great work I like your stuff!

I agree with blackpencil. This was not, by any means, a bad poem. However your writing style is too slang-y. The only problem with that is, and this is not an attack on you, but people may not take you to seriously when they see words constantly ending with z rather than s, u instead of you and 2 instead of to. If you want your poem to get recognized by a wider audience, which it should because it has some good potential, than I suggest editing the way it is written. Good work though!